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Max_Zeon

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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon7mth
    Replied to Freeborn2676

    nah, it got way worse. the novel had a lot of potential, but the author couldn't keep up the hype and just went back to default generic plots.

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    As An Immortal, I Only Learn Forbidden Skills
    Eastern · Vast Sky Drizzle
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon7mth
    Replied to _kazuma_desu

    if they realized that he was not the original owner of the body, he would be tortured body and soul (if they have such techniques). so yeah, chores yard would be much better.

    "Compared to this, being banished into the Chores Yard was just a minor issue!"
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    The Sage Who Transcended Samsara
    Eastern · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon7mth
    Replied to CenserBearer

    I think this shaolin head is a warrior buddhist, so he couldn't tolerate things that would put bad name on shaolin.

    Xuan Ku nodded slightly. "You have passable honesty. If you said that you were only interested in Buddhist teachings, I would have sent you to the Chores Yard as well. From now on your Dharma name will be "Zhen De", and you will become a member of the Warrior-monk Yard."
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    The Sage Who Transcended Samsara
    Eastern · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon7mth
    Replied to DaoistrGe4tJ

    No and yes both. Kungfu is a practice and can refer to both inner cultivation and martial arts practice. Cultivation in xianxia is more like chanting scriptures like Buddhism and raising your inner self. Kungfu is more like techniques in these settings.

    "He must be a Kungfu master!" Meng Qi concluded by recalling the novels and TV dramas that he had read and watched.
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    The Sage Who Transcended Samsara
    Eastern · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon7mth
    Replied to magicpootang

    He is struggling hard about this, so I think there is a show to watch soon. I mean if it doesn't work, he is going to be killing his sect and everyone he is close with.

    Ch 758 Human Race's Regional Treasure, Sun of Dawn! (3)
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    Outside Of Time
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon7mth
    Replied to samaya101

    can't remember the exact chapter, but it was when MC went on a mission with his sword holder friends to rescue the spy. He smelled osmanthus when the box was opened I think.

    Ch 753 The Smell of Osmanthus
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    Outside Of Time
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Commented

    ???

    Her sincere grief moved even Lin Qiye.
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    Worldwide Simulation Era
    Urban · White Divine Crane
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Commented

    This is quite correct. Humans tend to glorify and make people more mysterious as time passes. So, it is likely that he would be a real eternal legend.

    "Mr. Lin Qiye's death is the most painful loss in the history of mankind. Humans should mourn. Even 10,000 years later, we will still feel pity..."- World Media.
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    Worldwide Simulation Era
    Urban · White Divine Crane
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Replied to FilledWithHope

    It is one more. Not one.

    Unfortunately... Even though he had led the researchers to study cancer for ten years, it was still not enough to form a major historical event.
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    Worldwide Simulation Era
    Urban · White Divine Crane
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Posted

    I have read till chap 392. The translation quality is shitty. It looks like MTL version but a little bit edited. Every girl is denoted by 'he/him' most of the times. Boys are denoted by 'her' sometimes. It is not only the pronoun issue, even the translation became bad after the Dragon translation left and this Translator 549690339 took over. There is no way to immerse yourself in the reading. I only read it so far because I am a league player. Also, many chaps seem to be disconnected from each other and there seems to be few paragraphs missing. The story is actually good and would have been enjoyable if not for this shitty translation.

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    Infinite Divine Gears in the City
    Urban · All things Are Vanity
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Commented

    Makes sense since he seems to be a Chogath player

    [Resolve]: Live forever
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    Infinite Divine Gears in the City
    Urban · All things Are Vanity
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Commented

    it said 198 cm tall in the profile and here it 170? there is something wrong in this paragraph translation.

    Howard was almost two meters tall, and his wingspan was more than two hundred centimeters. He had just recently turned sixteen years old and was only a hundred seventy centimeters tall. Therefore, it was not advantageous for Li Rui to use long-ranged attacks.
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    Infinite Divine Gears in the City
    Urban · All things Are Vanity
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Commented

    shine bright like a diamond

    A bright golden tooth shone bright like a diamond while most of his other teeth were missing.
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    Infinite Divine Gears in the City
    Urban · All things Are Vanity
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Commented

    Is it pound or kg? 83 kg can be buff even with 2 meter height.

    In just a few years time, he had shrunken from a muscular demon at a peak of 130kg to only 83kg. He was just like a stick that would fall when the wind blew.
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    Infinite Divine Gears in the City
    Urban · All things Are Vanity
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Replied to FilledWithHope

    money

    But the lawyer that Howard had requested was a very powerful one, so in the end, he was declared 'not guilty' in court due to insufficient evidence.
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    Infinite Divine Gears in the City
    Urban · All things Are Vanity
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Commented

    This is correct tho. Author could have gone without the comparison, but it isn't racist, just the state of the world.

    But even so, his little sister who used to be a cute chubby little girl became as thin as a skeleton, like an African refugee.
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    Infinite Divine Gears in the City
    Urban · All things Are Vanity
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Commented

    I have been summoned, and I will respond. John Wick.

    Ch 1 Prologue: I have been summoned
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    Infinite Divine Gears in the City
    Urban · All things Are Vanity
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Replied to Max_Zeon

    Overall, it is a unique plot (since there are not many currently translated novels which have similar settings, at least I don't remember reading any), and a good one to pass time. The r18 scene was also described vividly and accurately, so plus points for that.

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    I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World
    Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Posted

    Up to date with the released chapters. The story is good but there have been more flaws as we keep on moving forward. 1) Poor grammar, but readable. 2) Too much information overload in some parts, but makes sense. 3) Too much cringe lines. 4) MC thinking the subordinates can betray him and doesn't want to trust the system too much, when it is literally the system giving him everything. 5) MC gets soul coins from killing other beings, but in recent chaps(specially in the forbidden areas part), he gets no soul coins from killing so many powerful cultivators. 6) MC taking risks for no reason, like he accompanied Isadora to unknown regions when he was just at Golden Core, then goes on to fight Core Formation Tree God when there was risk of failure. Why the heck would the author make MC go out when he doesn't have information on those parts. He could just wait and upgrade his strength and slowly scout out the regions through his subordinates. It is readable, but there are many things that could be improved.

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    I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World
    Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
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  • Max_Zeon
    Max_Zeon8mth
    Commented

    Hi, great story by the way. But you have been forgetting to reward MC with soul coins gained from defeating enemies. His 4 subordinates killed many in the forbidden areas, but he only got soul coins from the jar? They even killed core formation guys and gained nothing from them? Makes no sense to do this.

    Ch 178 Chapter 178: It's Time To Rob The Cultivators Of Thier Soul Coins
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    I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World
    Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
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