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if they realized that he was not the original owner of the body, he would be tortured body and soul (if they have such techniques). so yeah, chores yard would be much better.
I think this shaolin head is a warrior buddhist, so he couldn't tolerate things that would put bad name on shaolin.
No and yes both. Kungfu is a practice and can refer to both inner cultivation and martial arts practice. Cultivation in xianxia is more like chanting scriptures like Buddhism and raising your inner self. Kungfu is more like techniques in these settings.
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This is quite correct. Humans tend to glorify and make people more mysterious as time passes. So, it is likely that he would be a real eternal legend.
It is one more. Not one.
I have read till chap 392. The translation quality is shitty. It looks like MTL version but a little bit edited. Every girl is denoted by 'he/him' most of the times. Boys are denoted by 'her' sometimes. It is not only the pronoun issue, even the translation became bad after the Dragon translation left and this Translator 549690339 took over. There is no way to immerse yourself in the reading. I only read it so far because I am a league player. Also, many chaps seem to be disconnected from each other and there seems to be few paragraphs missing. The story is actually good and would have been enjoyable if not for this shitty translation.
Makes sense since he seems to be a Chogath player
it said 198 cm tall in the profile and here it 170? there is something wrong in this paragraph translation.
shine bright like a diamond
Is it pound or kg? 83 kg can be buff even with 2 meter height.
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This is correct tho. Author could have gone without the comparison, but it isn't racist, just the state of the world.
Up to date with the released chapters. The story is good but there have been more flaws as we keep on moving forward. 1) Poor grammar, but readable. 2) Too much information overload in some parts, but makes sense. 3) Too much cringe lines. 4) MC thinking the subordinates can betray him and doesn't want to trust the system too much, when it is literally the system giving him everything. 5) MC gets soul coins from killing other beings, but in recent chaps(specially in the forbidden areas part), he gets no soul coins from killing so many powerful cultivators. 6) MC taking risks for no reason, like he accompanied Isadora to unknown regions when he was just at Golden Core, then goes on to fight Core Formation Tree God when there was risk of failure. Why the heck would the author make MC go out when he doesn't have information on those parts. He could just wait and upgrade his strength and slowly scout out the regions through his subordinates. It is readable, but there are many things that could be improved.
Hi, great story by the way. But you have been forgetting to reward MC with soul coins gained from defeating enemies. His 4 subordinates killed many in the forbidden areas, but he only got soul coins from the jar? They even killed core formation guys and gained nothing from them? Makes no sense to do this.