MadScythe
Chapter 6: Pros: 1. Interesting idea with a new story plot. 2. Decent execution. Cons: 1. A lot of detail is missing in the chapters and lot of which isn’t explained very well or at all. 2. If you focus a lot on grammar and little details you’ll notice that it is kinda rough but understandable. Overall: It’s good but the execution and missing detail’s really is making it hard to be immersed
As a Filipino reader reading a Filipino novel, I cringe a little everytime there's names that came from local places. Although it's sometimes misspelled , scrambled or directly a parody counter part. I can see that the author read a few Chinese novel as I can see few resemblance of it in this novel. Some chapters have missing words. Some is are misspelled, few grammar checks are needed. But all in all it was a fine read.