Comfortably Trippy
I get why people are complaining so much but reading it until the last chapter, it was pretty decent read tbh. Sad that I will never know how he retaliate. First few chapters was a little inconsistent like you all are complaining about but it somehow understandable. He just got out of prison after all. It understandable his minds and action are inconsistent from his aim even with system. Those boxing part seem unnecessary too. Still though, it decent and pretty fun seeing the scheme unfold. Glad I didn't get influence by these comments before reading it.
trash book the trash itself , so much potential everything is wasted sigh the most blockhead protagonist in the world when u can get anything in the world u r not using your brain but plotting and face slapping by how cool u would look by killing someone and that's okk if it's repeatedly done for the nth time then it's trash ,it's a story written by a kid who really liked Hollywood movies so he just wrote it to get the feel and i am somewhat ok with this but u just left the story in the middile of nowhere for sure trash
I finished reading the story, tbh I am a bit disappointed where it ended off. I feel like the story has a lot potential in it to keep on going, plus just seems to be cut. The MC has an interesting power, a search bar that can answer anything. Though the potential is limited to only searching how to be safe(plot armour) and how to make the perfect crime. There could be lots of ways to use it instead of trying to predict the future. It seems like the power is only related to predicting the future. more side character development could be nice. the idea of having a powerful crew is good, we see the have a lot of potential but yet nothing develops with them. Tbh I like the dark power hungry revenge for love story. though fairly contradictory with a power that seem to be iq based. feels more like the power is in control than him. So in generals lots of potential, good ideas and development , good pace. It more of a book that need polishing but I found it an enjoyable read.
I feel like this author hates Capitalism with a personal vendetta I get it if a person wants revenge against a company. But in the first 20 chapters, there are 3 incidents where statements like "But to those abominable capitalists, he would become a demon to them", and "Itโs a good thing that Iโm the one who got this ability, giving me the ability to fight against the entire Alexander Corporation. Otherwise, how could I be a match for these capitalists?โ This is from CH 5 FYI, kids, capitalism is great as long as you're a part of it It makes people rich and is an important part of nearly EVERY economy in the world. I get it if you hate ONE corporation (We all hate Spirit Airlines), but I owe Apple gorgeous products and Lamborghini beautiful cars.
Honestly the beginning wasn't that bad, but everything change at the bar fight scene....like the he'll dude, the MC was all about revenge for what haooeb to him and his girlfriend but he never show real concern, he only visited once also at the first opportunity he cheats, and he could had done so much with his ability, like become Moriarty!
I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending! I'm not satisfied with the ending!