Bigfish
Novice writer from Chicago. I write for your enjoyment. Contact me at bigfishparties@gmail.com or on discord at Bigfish#3126.
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Temporary review for the time being. New chapters coming within the next few months! I have revised my previous work, and improved on it in many ways. Expect longer, more well-put together chapters. I'm planning on publishing again sometime in December, but no guarantees as of yet. I have two other novels already completed that I am revising and might upload afterwards depending on the reception of this one.
Wonderful. His revenge story and ultimate failure will compliment the Tyrant of Steel's legend.
Is he stupid? His little brother has tried to kill him three times. He even has evidence of one of his idiotic schemes. Present the evidence and then deliver a musket round through his chest. What is his father going to do when such obvious charges of treason are presented and Lambert is already dead? He can't appoint the sister as the next heir.
Very likely. In Berengar's case, I don't think he cares. He's already been ostracized by the nearby nobility due to Lambert's schemes.
Hm. It seems Webnovel scrunched my review together which makes it appear as a giant wall of text :/. TLDR; Leonel is portrayed as being highly intelligent but he follows Aina around like a dog in heat despite the fact she has done NOTHING for him. Not to mention he's an eighteen year old who suddenly obtains superpowers and yet he still has absolutely no ambition or drive to improve. Everything he's done as of chapter 73 just feels forced by the author. Leonel has shown no real desire to do anything other than follow Aina around.
Oops. I mean emoticons.
This grandpa makes me laugh every time with the emojis he sends.
Interesting.
Actually, I'm not sure if this author copied the other author or if they copied this one. Regardless, both novels aren't very good and certainly don't deserve to be translated by an actual team. No matter how you frame it, this story will get boring within 60-80 chapters even for the most devout fans.
It's a worse version of "I Can Create Perfect Accidents." Even that novel is subpar but this novel? It sucks. Identical concept with the only real difference between the two being the main character here is a lot more decisive in his actions. The pacing is also faster but that comes with the cost of no real depth or actual background. Keep in mind I skimmed eleven chapters so maybe I missed certain things. Overall, 1.8/5 stars. I'm being generous since this is a blatant plagiarism and the new author wrote an even worse story.
Please translate this novel. It is the latest work by the author of Reverend Insanity which is one of the best web novels out there. This book has a slow start, I won't deny that. There is plenty of action at the start but not a whole lot going on if that makes sense. I'm afraid if I say more I might spoil some of the plot but trust me when I say this is a really good novel. Not perfect, but above average without a doubt.