Xuanting_Official
i took the plunge for everyone who is curious about this novel as of now(chap 86) i would like to say the story is aight its as most people have said like the shield girl one but a little less cringe but with more chinese influence although it has an american background at some point in the 30's-40's it wasnt even a novel anymore it feels like a machine translation where one sentence its completely wrong and the next its the right grammar as the story is progressing the mc is slowly going from reg player who got supremely lucky to cliche arrogant chinese mc who looks down on everyone i also really hoped that there wouldnt be any "im rich so everyone caters to me and i can throw money around like it's nothing so everyone is my servant" kind of side villians but you do see it every few chapters at the beginning the author or translater (by how the novel is reading) was doing pretty well and keeping up with stats and skills but later has just totally given up on correcting mistakes and just copy pasteing mtls i would like to say that ill continue holding out and hoping that maybe it would get better but as of now id say theres no hope, u gotta pay for chapters 20 chapters early and theres no effort being put into the grammar so that people who have a hard time reading will have an even harder time id say just give up dont read it if ur curious go ahead its not like im your boss
For game that claimed 100% realism, it's not realistic at all. To move you need agility, to wield weapon you need strength. To learn skill you need int. It's impossible for all stat to 0. You need minimum point for caracter to work. When you dump all points to def it's like you become statue. You have hard Rock skin but can't move
Needs work. More time spent fleshing out the storyline while also developing dialogue will greatly reduce how chaotic the novel feels IMO. This may potentially be due to english transation or english not being first language. Only read first 20 chapters and like the premise of OP shield MC. As the author gains experience writing should get better. Cover art is entirely misleading and should be changed ASAP!!! Good luck author i‘m rooting for you!