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Servitude07

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2020-09-20 JoinedGlobal
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072mth
    Replied to LittleRedsWolf
    Experience points: 0/660
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    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072mth
    Replied to xXLordKhaosXx13

    It was. I've seen translations that interchange demon/magic before. Translation issue maybe?

    After increasing both Combat Power Level and Species Level, Gangzi's Purple Crystal Armor had turned into Magic Crystal Armor.
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    Beast Taming: I Can Even Breed Gods and Demons
    Eastern · Colorless Sea
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude077mth
    Commented

    intermediate

    Giant Ugly Fish (beginner level)
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    Beastmastering: The Best Master Ever!
    Eastern · Milk Bottle Huge
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude0710mth
    Replied to Helios_Sol

    I think it's Qty-6 Tier-5/Lvl-1

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    I Shall Evolve Everything
    Fantasy · Spaceninja5789
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude071yr
    Replied to Cyclxne

    I'm not sure I'd agree with that, but ok. I'll humor you.

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    Xianxia Online
    Games · Cyclxne
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude071yr
    Posted

    Needs work. More time spent fleshing out the storyline while also developing dialogue will greatly reduce how chaotic the novel feels IMO. This may potentially be due to english transation or english not being first language. Only read first 20 chapters and like the premise of OP shield MC. As the author gains experience writing should get better. Cover art is entirely misleading and should be changed ASAP!!! Good luck author i‘m rooting for you!

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    I'm Unbeatable After I Have Full Defense
    Games · Xuanting_Official
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude071yr
    Commented

    Make them your first undead!

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    My Necromancer Class
    Fantasy · Aero182
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude071yr
    Commented

    with all I had*

    My own created martial arts wasn't for rules, it was to fight with all I got.
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    Martial Arts System
    Action · Alekzi
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude071yr
    Commented

    #10,000BeforeBill

    "Was I reborn in some kind of indigenous tribe?"
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    I Can Make Everything Level UP
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude071yr
    Commented

    HP should be 30 no?

    HP: 21/21 > 33/33
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    Super Necromancer System
    Fantasy · John_Doever
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072yr
    Commented

    Anihalates 80+ km surrounding mc village. Still commoner... -_-

    Achievement Points: Commoner (68/200)
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    The Lord’s Empire
    Games · Shen Tianyi
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072yr
    Commented

    Hmmm... Tell me more of this "bloodless" carotid artery technique.

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    Endzone: Simulated Apocalypse
    Games · Cyclxne
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072yr
    Commented

    Ok, I can get over using "Cyanide" as a code name, but are we seriously using "the" Cyanide here? Me thinks it a bit too much.

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    Endzone: Simulated Apocalypse
    Games · Cyclxne
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072yr
    Commented

    Say it again.

    Lt. Julian Weber gazed across the construction project his unit was responsible for. As the U.S. involvement in the war in Afghanistan came to a close, he was stuck building a bridge in the middle of nowhere for some god-forsaken country. If there was one thing he had learned during his four years as an officer in the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers, it was unwise to criticize the high command's stupidity openly.
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    Tyranny of Steel
    History · Zentmeister
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072yr
    Commented

    Why spawn in underpants?

    But since Liam was currently in his underpants, he still took these trash items and equipped everything. The three items of clothing each gave 1 defense point and his previous 2 defense immediately went up by 3 points.
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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072yr
    Commented

    Dagger (Basic) = Highly skilled...right.

    It was that skill that turned him from a total newbie into a highly skilled dagger user, one able to kill his opponent with one hit.
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    The Devil's Cage
    Games · Rusty Dragon
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072yr
    Commented

    Low key danger vibes.

    Judging by what he had read in the diary, it was not safe around that area.
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    The Devil's Cage
    Games · Rusty Dragon
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072yr
    Commented

    Check inside the chest. If it had a backpack maybe it's got a bazooka too.

    That unorganized, messy diary, other than providing some basic information for Kieran, also provided a clue: There had to be a weapon inside the body in front of him.
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    The Devil's Cage
    Games · Rusty Dragon
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072yr
    Commented

    Named himself Dell the Lucky. No truer words have been spoken. Until they weren't.

    Hahaha, luck is really on my side! I’ve hit the jackpot! Not only have I found food, I have even found weapons! Please refer to me as Dell the Lucky from now on!
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    The Devil's Cage
    Games · Rusty Dragon
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  • Servitude07
    Servitude072yr
    Commented

    KYS

    Damn it, I’ve been robbed by a thug. The only canned food and water I had left is all gone, taken away by that scoundrel. What should I do now?
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    The Devil's Cage
    Games · Rusty Dragon
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