Reviews of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

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Was quite enjoyable until end of book 3, after that it took a nosedive. Character design went down the gutter, the Mc showed to be completly useless, making no difference if he wouldn't be in this world and portrayed as the next rowena ravenclaw, but acting like a idiot. Such a shame, but done with this after investing time to read 200 chapters.

initially was complete 5 stars but now the protagonist completey let gos of his initial reluctance to involve his family in the war, but later in the story he does by guiding the DA. Completey messing up his family neutrality!

so author builds up a relationship with Daphne... then brings in fleur who's been present for like 10 chps and decides to make the MC go with fleur instead....

I LIKED THE BOOK BUT NOT LOVED IT BECAUSE OF MC POTTER DISEASE. EVERYTIME HE HEARS A POTTER HIS ATTITUDE CHANGE TO THAT OF A LOATHING. MAN THEY ARE THEY AND U ARE U. WHY ARE LOATHING POTTER THAT MUCH. OKAY U DON'T LIKE THEM SO DON'T INTERACT WITH THEM. BUT NO. YOU'LL WATCH THEIR WHOLE LIVES FROM SIDELINES THEN STARTED YOUR POTTER DISEASES RANTS. HOPE YOU CHANGE THIS AUTHOR. I'M SURE MANY READERS WOULD AGREE WITH ME. ALSO GIVE HIM A MOTIVE ...

this is good and i hope you just concentrate on this and just dropped your other loser kuroko no basket work, seriously that's one of the most useless work i ever read its the same as canon and teiko wins everyone of them even with his op cheat, he should have win on his first year he has a good teammate and the generation haven't awaken yet, and he wished to win the other year when the others have awaken and his teammate is trash yeah that one really is trash in terms of story development

it is cannon just With the bare minimum of changes _________________________________________________________________________________________

Well, this fan fiction is the best thing I've read lately, I finished 130 chapters in a week. The characters are revealed over time and each character has its own character, which the author describes quite colorfully in practice. A special story with Quinn, which will not leave anyone indifferent who reads fan fiction on HP. The plot develops in small steps, there is no such thing that MS bends everyone from the very beginning, fights are described very interestingly, although not often, but there is an explanation for this. There is a logical explanation for all his magic power. Of course, looking at all these factors, I understand that I have never read this anywhere before and this is the most interesting story! I advise everyone, you will not regret the time spent.

This Fanfiction is awesome compared to other potterverse fanfiction I have read in the past. The story starts nice then gets very interesting The MC's character is developed very well and world background is quite nice as well. I would recommend anyone to read this.

Honestly, this novel started great. Kudos to the author! The author clearly has talent and immense potential with writing online literature such as webnovels and fanfics. With that said, let's move on to my review. Like I said, this novel had a great start. It was a niche take on the usual transmigration trope that is prevalent in this website. The MC transmigrated knowing about the world he's in, but he has no cheats. The MC spent a majority of his childhood and early adolescent years being... SIGMA. The MC is a flawed, yet very much driven person; which makes him POWERFUL. I was in awe of the MC. I felt like I was a part of his journey for power since I feel his progress every step of the way. He used to be someone who aims to be a better version of himself... Until he succumbed to his disgusting inner demons. I won't say more because it's a spoiler, duh. But I can say enough to make future readers understand. The MC used to be someone who operated on a defined moral principle. A principle that he decided out of nowhere to betray just because he realized an unconscious desire that he had; an unconscious desire that LITERALLY EVERY HORMONAL TEENAGER had at one point in their lives. If it was the MC in the past, he would've had enough BALLS to choose one outcome at the cost of another. It's called Opportunity Cost and everyone would encounter that logic someday in their lives. The MC became a pathetic man who succumbed to his own Id that somehow beat both his Ego and Super-Ego. This novel took an unrealistic turn on how its characters should've acted. For me, it stopped feeling like going on a journey with the powerful and driven character I grew to respect because of how abrupt his character changed. The MC failed in his character development arc. Honestly, not everyone will have the same opinion as me. Some people, childish ones or readers just looking to read a generic story in this website, would probably still like this story after the 7th Year in Hogwarts Arc. The writing quality is great and I would 100% read the author's future works, but I'm afraid I have to stop at Chapter 350 something. Can't remember where exactly I stopped. Anyway, that's it for my very short and low quality review. Again, thank you for publishing this fanfic @FictionOnlyReader! I'll be looking forward to your future works.

He’s a transmigrator right? Did it state what age he was before entering the harry potter wold, because this isn't how an adult behaves, he is well and truly a child and it seems him being a transmigrator is only used when the plot calls for it as he shows an alarming lack of knowledge about the hp world. I mean he has certainly changed a lot as a character and acts erratic changing from an introverted bookworm who doesnt want to be interrupted to a extrovert who wants to build connections. But he is still a child and even adults change their mind like the weather. Although the MC's change in personality is slightly more extreme. A lot of the changes can be explained by the personality merge but only as long as the author delves into it and the MC realizes that his behavior is erratic and unusual and changes like the weather. Overall not a good experience while reading this, chances of this ff being cancelled/dropped? 80% it’ll happen this year 20% next year. WQ: 3 stars. SU: 3 stars. SD and CD is 1 star. And WB: 2 stars.

i think author got brain damage after chapter 300 don't waste ur time it goes from good to complete garbage just writing this to reach character limit ignore

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i can only describe this novel as a great piece of fiction, But.. you abandoned the good points of the novel, at the start the mc experimented with magic manipulation of mana, and then unique explanation of mind arts, both are extremely interesting concepts which got me hooked and then,, everything related to magic (except mind arts and magic manipulation) became a mess, you did not explain or mentioned how magic in itself works unlike mind arts we remained clueless, you created a "plan" for the mc to learn magic from different cultures and integrate into his own but we did not see any indication he did so, you mentioned "soul arts" and "elemental spells" as part of this knowledge but when he fought the troll he did not use any of those magic arts, we know he can use up to 7th grade wandless magic but nothing impressive shown so far.. in a world where obscurus can level mountains and grindelwald can wipe out cities he seems very weak, understandable he is second grade but still no elemental magic, not spell creation, nothing... review in chapter 31.

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EDIT... I read until Ch 57 (Author's NOTE) This novel is basically... "There're some changes in the HP world, but don't worry for MC is here to fix everything so it all ended the same as the original."

I must admit that I really enjoyed reading your fanfic. Glad to see Cursed Vaults from the game. There are some moments that I'm disagree with, but... I think every reader has his own opinions on how it could be better 🙂 Hope you'll tell us more about Harry Potter in your AU story.

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Man your KnB fanfic was awesome. Wish you could continue it again. For time being, I'll read this instead. hdj dkskskndiskznzhsjsjzjxnnxbdjsjzjzj

First of all, I don't recomend reading this fic, why ? because the fic at the start is good and you can came to love it. But after that the fic goes in a down hill. Now that I get that done I'll start the review or my 2nd or 3rd one, I have finish it and I regret reading it. You start loving the characters ( the strong part of this novel) even the MC but arc after arc, the plot get worse, the best characters you don't "see" them as often, and the author waste some of the OC or OOC, the finishing is plain trash. The vaults are zzz, the MC doesn't mature and makes the same mistakes over and over again. The worst is the last part, it's pure drama, just to make the story longer/finish it, or make the MC to suffer.