the story base is extremely good, but the the mc is too hipocrite , . And is too weak hearted, also unable to stand on one decesion. Also naive .

although the story is good, the character design of the main character is bad. He should just work towards his goals, and trying to pity and helping the original characters.

initially was complete 5 stars but now the protagonist completey let gos of his initial reluctance to involve his family in the war, but later in the story he does by guiding the DA. Completey messing up his family neutrality!

man it's another one of those stories where the character will hug the legs of the original protagonist and follow behind like a loyal dog .

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the fanfiction Protagonist should pave his own path , instead following behind the Original MC all the while helping the MCs. The story was going great at the beginning, but later transforms into a beta supporter.

i dont understand why all the authors , while writing aim to follow the original protagonists like puppies and becoming a pure beta supporting character. And NOT aiming to make the SI(s) Alpha and them leading the the story ,while not being a saint who's objective is to distribute all of his resources and knowledge with the original protagonists. I wish that stories for the SI(s) where they decide where the story line should go.