Reviews of HOTD Mature Parody

We a have our starts and i hate to admit it but my beginning isn't good. The one thing that i need the most right now is experience so by writing chapters as time passea by i hope that i can improve and provide you guys a more detailed and well structured content.

A hidden gem here in this site. This book deserves a higher ranking. The story changes is good, but there are some grammar and sentence mistakes from time to time.

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The first r-18 scene was too sudden i think. But after that is good. Too damn good. Ignore. Hsbchfmchnc Chhchf Fjcjc J Chf Hahha Ahabxhed Jcc j jchjdjjjdjxnc

You this story is lot more realistic then a anime when world end people will always try to deny or try to find comfort so seeing all the lemons scenes it actually more realistic is there way of comfort them selfse so this story is great 👍

Good fanfiction !!!! Love it !!!! Thanks for this novel !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-

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Pretty much just follows canon but with a lot of *** involved. The writing structure and grammar is terrible but if you wanted to an ***** version of HOTD than this is it. Honestly, it was a struggle to read through but there are so few HOTD fics that I pushed through. Not complete but, who knows, maybe it will be one day.

It’s ok not good or bad.

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Happy birthday author👏👏👏 More chapters!!! More chapters!!! More chapters!!! More chapters!!! More chapters!!! More chapters!!! More chapters!!! More chapters!!! More chapters!!! More chapters!!! More chapters!!! More chapters!!!

I see what your doing and I gotta say that you have to keep it up! Maybe in the future you can create your own original parts that come after the fact of where the manga ends!

great story I like it very much . .. .. .. .. .. ...

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