HelenBold
To be honest, this story has hooked me, especially Hope. The idea is great and so is your writing. I found little to no grammatical errors. I just hope that you will describe Hope's appearance and work on world-building. Overall, it's great work. Highly recommended. I have added it to lib and I am waiting for the next chap. :D
Nice story, pace is stable not too fast not too slow. Lots of detail. It's nice to see how the FL is developing. ML comes across as strong but has its own insecurities. The story shows how he overcomes that. Every relationship has its plus and minus points. story takes us their ups and downs how they come together in the end.
This novel has a very captivating hook. Both of the leads are dynamic and their banter is enjoyable to read. The premise of the arena battle reminds me a little of the book, Red Queen. Though this novel has a fun (and less graphic) twist! However, I did find that the beginning was a little fast paced. The progression of events didn't seem realistic, and I wish I could've gotten to know more about Hope and her motivations before she was thrust into a new life with Drake.
Wow, it's not every day that I read a story like this. This is really good. The writing is good, the updates are steady, the worldbuilding is legit, the characters are cool, and the description is also great. The characters are well developed. The romance is fantastic. The story and pacing is phenomenal. It is exciting. I just kind of don't like the romance as well, but this story is 5 stars for me. Bravo. But I wouldn't recommend for anyone to use this book as a moral basis. It's very cool, but goes against some of my religious views. But for entertainment, it's outstanding.
This is wonderful! The author has a fantastic way of describing things in a way that really helps you get a feel for how the characters think and act. Hope has to be one of the best characters I have seen written, she is brave, bold, and not afraid to say her mind. I love her dynamics with Drake- another great character. It makes for some really interesting reading, and her abilities with animals are really unique in this sense. The plot is great, quick moving and never stale. The dialogue is witty, humorous and detailed, overall, a really great read! You did a fantastic job author, you have my support!