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This novel has a very captivating hook. Both of the leads are dynamic and their banter is enjoyable to read. The premise of the arena battle reminds me a little of the book, Red Queen. Though this novel has a fun (and less graphic) twist! However, I did find that the beginning was a little fast paced. The progression of events didn't seem realistic, and I wish I could've gotten to know more about Hope and her motivations before she was thrust into a new life with Drake.

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Hope: The Beast Mistress

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Thank you for your feedback! My writing style has a fast-paced intro and intrigue, and the characters and their motivation are presented as they go into the story through inner thoughts, dialogues, and flashbacks. I know some people would love to learn more about the characters from the start, but I am a discovery writer: I don't know more than the reader about the characters or the world. I find out everything as I write, and a movie is playing inside my head :)