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Multiverse Occultist

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Loreheim
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This has already formed a ancient ritual— Shard of Reader. So here comes nothing— "O' Readers Of Destiny! Heed The Power Of Mine Words! For I Be The Entity With Thousand Thoughts! Join Forth!" "Thou Shall See The Dateless Light of Genesis Beyond With The Eternal Darkness of Extinction!" "Upon Mine Oath, Be The Salvation From Above! Abrahadabra!" "Shining Eyes Of Overpowered! Whose Nature Is Harem! Wanderers Walking In The Darkness Of Search!" "Dispenser Of Blue Stones Of Power! One Who Wishes For Endless World! Who Resides In Animes & Novels!" "Drums Of Hate! Heart Of Supreme Wisdom In Appreciation! Even The One Whose Nature Is Unknown! All Be Here!" "For Here Be The Glory Of The Most Glorious! Thou Shall Become The One Who Haunts Infinite Bliss! Thee Thrist Be Satiated" "For I Lore, Who Descends Of His Own Free Will Shall Bellow For—" " <Infinite Readers Works>! "

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LORD_OF_ORIGIN
LORD_OF_ORIGINLv4LORD_OF_ORIGIN

If you are going to read half of my review and then take out your own complicated meaning from it, buzz off. To my junior readers, peers and.... umm, my senior readers, I, The Lord of Origin, would first of all like to thanks 'sects' like Lore Temple and BingeFics. I would also to give special thanks to Fellow Daoist Lore and Fellow Daoist Binge. My appreciation towards Venerable Random Alex, Venerable Leeva, Venerable iampoorguy, Venerable Alex Clive and Venerable DivinDragonEmperor. Of course, I also give my regards towards other Fanfic writers, just like Esteemed Fellow Daoist Einlion. A 0.5 degree prideful bow to all of you. (0.0001 degree = Decades of Luck, enough for you to become a Campione, those of you who have read the novel will understand.) A long, long time ago, I left this realm and traveled to the 'raw' realm. There I saw for the first time— bigger paradise that I cannot understand. But, as the Lord of Origin, I am not one of those who gets defeated by facing setbacks. So, I leaped up back on my feet and tried to understand the 'laws' of those realm. And here I am, who can now read half baked g00gl€ translations, with my brain already filtering the wrong grammer. So, back to the topic, as the one who has read more than 800 chapters of the original novel, I am over qualified to comment on this fan fiction. This fan fiction is FABULOUS! FABULOUS! FABULOUS! Important things are to be said three times. MC's personality is unique, he is neither a hero nor a villian, a true anti-hero. He works on wisdom. At start he may seem cruel to all, but that is because of the 'Aspect' incident, he evolves, more loving and caring but only for his loved ones. For his enemies, he is the worst devil. This One Is Without Racism! Finally! Well, till now where I have read there is no racism. However I don't know why but this novel's g00gl€ translation is more HurUUUUU... AAAAA.. GHAGHUUUH... gasp... gasp.. than other's, those who have been with me at that side can testify, though words of Lord of Origin is eternal truth. Anyway, I still read the story, Why? Because 'toxin' may be harmful but was too delicious. Ok, now this novel's main theme is –>World Hopping. I am one of those system lovers as it gives me the ideas to make new systems but I genuinely liked this novel even though it isn't one with a system. In my opinion, the arcs after the campione is more interesting. But it is only comparative. I will not do a spoiler show here, so the - Pros of reading here - Whoever translated and the edited made the whole novel more descriptive, not filled with boring stuff. The myths behind mc's authorities are more clearly explained here then in the original novel. So they did research, huh. Moreover the conversation is more 'beautiful'. Overall, it looks like half a fanfic of the original fanfic. And the thing I like the most is the power system is more clearly explained than in the original novel. However it doesn't over-ride the original meaning. You can compare if you want to. The created incantation for each <Holy Right> which didn't existed in the original novel. Con— Greed is an Original Sin. As the representative of the reader association it is my right, duty and shamelessness to ask for more chapters. We, Readers, Greedy, For, More! And, pls, pls, don't give up. But anyways— #Kudos. R.S.P.V. —The Lord of Origin, Primordial Truth Scriber of Novel God Pathneon.

Lazyboi
LazyboiLv4Lazyboi

This fic truly shines among the numerous toaru crossovers. It incoporate toaru elements well with the crossover world. Some might say that the info dumb is unnecessary but i think otherwise. More info would make the readers understand the characters thought process and course of actions better. It makes a much more interesting read. And finally as a harem lover, i'm waiting in anticipation on how many girls the mc would get in the future. So keep pumping those chapters author.

DaoisttG3KuY
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NO_GUD
NO_GUDLv5NO_GUD

What a wonderful fanfic this is, the MC is very likeable and the way the current arc is progressing is quite nice to me. Also as a harem lover, him having a likeable harem that's developed right is a instant plus from me too. Some may be turned off by the info dumps in the beginning but I think its quite a noice touch and the info dumps lessen by a lot in the future chapters so you'll be missing out a lot if you drop it because of that reason. Overall a really good fanfic especially if you love Campione.

Aniruddh_GK
Aniruddh_GKLv11Aniruddh_GK

the story is amazing and the editing is even better and as I read the MTL I realised how much is edited and added the plot is excellent as I don't even know toaru or campione but it's still interesting to me

LookBehind_Me
LookBehind_MeLv1LookBehind_Me

Support. If you are a myth lover who likes logical story be sure to read this. After reading EPIC(Endless Path: Infinite Cosmos), this first time I found something similar.

Hero_MT
Hero_MTLv5Hero_MT

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SR_2027
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Well I accidentally stumbled upon this ff. At first I read it for passing time but it got me addicted. Good work out there author 😃👍! You might need some basic knowledge in starting chapter as mc is in ToAru world which is very complicated but because of author's good writing quality and detailed description, you will not be confused much. Now since it's multiverse traveling, so normally there might be loopholes but due to author's good knowledge of animes which mc has visited or will visit, you will get the best world background description and good development without any wrong development or big loopholes... ______________________ Writing quality is very good. Almost none grammatical mistakes present... Story development is very good, with good writing skills, author had made good use anime background information and made quite a good ff. Character designs is a bit complicated to say as you don't know much about mc and I can fully say the mc is Neutral good in nature and will do everything in his way to achieve his objective. (At least according to me) Updating stability is best. World background is a bit complicated but nonetheless it's quite good for future development of ff. The background will make him fight powerful opponents as the time goes. I really want to see what the next world the mc might go...

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

This novel reminded me a lot of another story that I used to like on this site "tale of discovery". Because of some world and background choices. That's doesn't mean in a bad way like the story is plagiarized, no it's not. It's just remind me...anyway. I really like it so far. All ideas seems to be intresting and well though so far. From mc abilities to world choices. And that's great. And I do love all mythos and biblical references. Duuh, I am loving evangelion and shin megami tensei games. Even smite with God ramblings - so yeah, I love this stuff. The only concern for now is a harem aspect of this novel. I am not sure how it will go... Especially with mc weird character. I have some concern... But anyway, great story so far.

LookBehind_Me
LookBehind_MeLv1LookBehind_Me

The prologue of the story seems really interesting!! Waiting for the main course of this potentially good book!!Kudos..Seems something out of the box.. :))

Alex1911
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Reveal spoiler

Vandumbo
VandumboLv3Vandumbo

OH GOSH! WHAT A FIND! GUYS, GUYS! COME AND READ THIS! I AM SURE YOU WILL LIKE IT! EVERYTHING IS SO GOOD! IT MAKES YOU WANT TOO READ AND CONTINUE! BUT THE BEST IN MY OPINION, IS THE EXICTEMENT IT PROCURE! Have you already watched and read something that makes your blood boil in excitation? I have, and this book procure me this same sensation that I love. The fact that the author is able to transmit it, is for me a proof that this book is excellent, if not more.

Mr_Rohai
Mr_RohaiLv3Mr_Rohai

Let's hope that the Author will not quit this job.

DetectiveHaremCHAD
DetectiveHaremCHADLv14DetectiveHaremCHAD

My word i did not expect to find this novel to be awesome i feel like find a treasure in this web to think i will gain some cool and awesome line or knowledge about some occult, religion and some supernatural stuff I also didn't expect it be cool if this is add in the fighting scene or saying cool or edgy stuff in the beginning i just that this novel is just like those boring or ordinary so-so which not good and bad novel i or also thought that the author hit his head or on high or maybe super bored to create a novel with occultism, religion or some other stuff added in the novel so i thought this novel will fail or become so-so novel but looks like i need to take my words back this novel is awesome and very interesting and also because of some interesting knowledge and information or cool line and Great characters design and very lively character interaction with each and it surrounding and great detail of each situation and world background and design that make this novel a treasure atleast in my opinion so pls don't argue with my comment about which is great and which is bad because I'm also a novice in creating detail review or nice and impormative comment

ahmed_waleed_1200
ahmed_waleed_1200Lv5ahmed_waleed_1200

Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters Can't wait to read more of this fantastic story, Thank you very much.

File_01_Adam
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Infinite_Spades07
Infinite_Spades07Lv1Infinite_Spades07

It had the potential to be good, however, the pacing can be debilitating in some respects, and the quality drops off in the fate arc, I don't know if it will get better, however, because the dialogue is much worse than it was in the campione arc.

Daoist8bShmk
Daoist8bShmkLv1Daoist8bShmk

Contrived, long drawn, and boring. In an attempt to sound smarter than it is and more philosophical, it ends up sounding goofy and juvenile. If only the grammar wasn’t like it was written like it was trying too hard to use words the author doesn’t know

LORD_OF_ORIGIN
LORD_OF_ORIGINLv4LORD_OF_ORIGIN

Love the Lore and how the world building was handled. Not to say about the surprise elements, it's continuous. A page turner. A gem I would say!