DetectiveHaremCHAD
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i had a huge laugh reading this line.
Why settled on a single tree if you can have both
Even though this is confusing to read, i actually had a hard laugh reading this line.
It's okay the story can be improved as long as you try adding your own idea and improve as you progress, as try fixing each paragraph that has a problem on addressing and pointing each character as they make conversation and monologue. I recommend you try experimenting on your novel and add more ideas to the story.