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The beginning seemed to be good, but MS knows the plot of Naruto and remembers it. Therefore, it was necessary to do the most dangerous thing that can be thought up in Konoha before the 3rd war, to show a huge talent so that danzo would want to take him and finish school earlier so that he would be taken to the war. Bravo. If you want action, then don't do the dumbest thing that can push the plot
The mc never once kills any canon characters and in general the larger story line is exactly the same as canon. Nothing interesting or unique happens, the author just sticks to canons rails never trying to change anything or give the mc any unique impact. If you've read the original story there's no reason to read this.
I had to write another review after reading 400 chapters. Everything was going great until chapter 300. From there everything started getting worse. Translation started becoming like machine translation, Ryo started his hardest after the plot started (naruto went to academy) to make every single thing like in the actual plot (which makes 0 sense since he has already changed so many things before). So now after 400 chapters I can not read anymore because this novel was ruined... The worst part is he never become the hokage (the novels name is ryo - hokage) but has made sakumo not the fifth but a temporary hokage ho has been a hokage for a decade now.... Utter nonsense... π
Nothing really happens for the entire fanfic. Mc has kage level streangth before any impactfull event which would influence the anime world. Kanabi bridge, Rin, kyubi massacare, uchiha masacare. Mc knows all about them, but when anything is about to go down, he just isn't there to help or gets slowed down enough to not mater anymore. Tldr: mc has enough power to do whatever he wants but in the end does nothing so that the plot doesn't need to be changed by the Author.
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good story. i recommended β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―β―
Great Novel, Writer Had Really Captured The Essence Of Naruto, Unlike Other Writers, Who In Their Quest To Make Fanfic More Cool Diverge From The Plot. Really A Cool Novel, MC Could Have A Harem. Also His Mangekyo Ability, Unlike Increase Power of Jutsu could have been something to do with souls, like one eye has a ice dimension, while other eye can capture or control souls. Still Thanks For This Novel ππππβ€