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Her mercy to His penitence

MUHACHE_JUMA

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kathleenneko
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Hello Humeyra! I've read the 1st Chapter and two thumbs up for you![img=recommend] It was such a good opening for the story, the first part was quite heavy of course because it was about suicide but as the narration goes it became lighter and warmer. The story was intriguing, because imagining how Jasmine was living her life in the present versus imagining how she used to be in the past was a total opposite sides. I love the way you narrate your story, the flow of your narration was smooth and easy to understand. And as what you have said, this story was not yet edited so it's understandable that some sentence didn't start with a capital letters. all in all it was a great chapter to start the story and to catch the attention of the readers. Keep up the good work! Looking forward for the next chapters.

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Sbrc12
Sbrc12Lv1Sbrc12

This is quite a lovely story where I can feel the emotions of the main character slowing through the time she spends with the different situations and with the different people she is with, It really warmed my heart with the very first chapter.

Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv13Mary_Algen_Guiang1

It was suicidal and good, and just the right amount of drama and heartbreak to make the readers feel. such a wonderful story! I loved it, really!

_HS_
_HS_Lv2_HS_

Amazing I really like the characters names, Your words are so good, and the idea is really amazing, A great book and an amazing author, keep the good work.

Joondabest_
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the novel just keeps getting fascinating and engaging, I love the concept of the novel! it's very very well written. The author always has my heart! Keep up the good work, author!

foxyash
foxyashLv3foxyash

Reading from the synopsis I can tell that this book is female lead character...great synopsis! I can already divulge in the book and can imagine what that girl been through....loved it...it's gonna be very interesting reading...good work author and best of luck

Ramsha_Rais
Ramsha_RaisLv1Ramsha_Rais

This novel is amazing and it is definitely worth a read! I read the synopsis and it was soooo intriguing that I couldn't control but read and read on! Absolutely great work author! Keep writing!

_Ana_16_
_Ana_16_Lv1_Ana_16_

This story is really great and interesting! I absolutely loved the way the whole thing flows, the storyline is beautiful and the plot is great, the characters are lovely!

mcross_1005
mcross_1005Lv2mcross_1005

The story is promising. It gives you a homologous feeling of warmth along with a coinciding bitter feeling of lost trust or betrayal. I like the FL's character, her viewpoint and her development. The chapters are not much, but it gives you a story of self-love and recovery. For someone with only fictional crushes, I sometimes wonder what "true-love" feels like. Overall, it is a good read and I would recommend it much!!

Blessing_Ewetumo
Blessing_EwetumoLv3Blessing_Ewetumo

I honestly loved everything about this story, it had heart and soul and when you read it you will feel quite a mix of emotions due to the struggles and excitements within the story. I loved it a lot, good job author👍.

Banaaminana
BanaaminanaLv1Banaaminana

This is amazing and I love everything about this book but all I have to say is that the word choice is good but it is overly used but I am sure that this book will be the most successful one on WebNovel. I really love fantasy Novels and this is one of my most favorite. Love everything that this contains, I hope you win the spirity awards!!

Shanique_Mahbeir_3863
Shanique_Mahbeir_3863Lv2Shanique_Mahbeir_3863

This was quite an interesting story. Very authentic. The characters already show signs of growth and their development is greatly anticipated. I love where the storyline is leading and I look forward to seeing where this goes.