Mary_Algen_Guiang1
❤️Instagram: _attyguiang ❤️Webnovels: "Bewitching Illusions"; "The Male Lead is Obsessed with Me (Books 1 and 2)" ; and "His Dark Desire: Tales of a Yandere".
Writing
of reading
298
Read books
Badges
13Moments
2298
Mary_Algen_Guiang116hReplied to delphinemaple721Ch 220 viii. The Visitor- Mary_Algen_Guiang15dReplied to Jany_Calypse
trueeee! despicable old madame 😭😭😭😭
The old woman did not even look back at the girl, her conscience finally taking root. She couldn't look at that pathetic girl who won't even accept the money in exchange for losing her love. - Mary_Algen_Guiang15dPosted
Before anything else, I want to congratulate you for your passion and hardwork. Now, the things I like on your book... First, I love that you used the first person’s point of view. It always feels more personal when one does that. Second, I also like that you have updates consistently, one thing I very much wish I could do for my book as well. Third, I like how vivid you describe the surroundings. You have a talent with world building, one I truly admire. Now on things that I think could be improved... First, some of the paragraphs are too long. They are hard to read for some of the readers, and could feel like a detriment to their readership enjoyment. Second, for your future book, if you can make the first chapter as a chapter between the female lead and the male lead, I think that would be better. I always try to start with their first meeting or if not, a chapter that I find really interesting. Remember that your goal for the first chapter is to catch your readers’ attention. Since your genre would focus on romance, you need the characters to see the possible intensity of the match. In the end, what really matters is how you feel when you are writing the chapters. As long as you are enjoying the story you have written, then the battle is already half-way won! Thank you so much for giving me an opportunity to review your first novel. As they always say, an author’s first project is always her first love. Keed doing your best and enjoy the long journey ahead of you!
- Mary_Algen_Guiang110dReplied to Ami_Young_4435Ch 1 Fire
- Mary_Algen_Guiang110dReplied to Jany_CalypseCh 42 ii. Game
- Mary_Algen_Guiang111dReplied to Jany_Calypse
🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
No, she couldn't know how he can recall even the tiniest details about the life of the knight and her queen. How he started dreaming of another world, of another time, of another them ever since he has met her. - Mary_Algen_Guiang111dReplied to Jany_Calypse
hahahaha thank you so much! 😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I love all of your reactions!
His muscles stiffened, so that is how it all ended. He clenched his jaw as his fist rolled into a ball. It was right for him to kill them all, those bastards were the cause of her death. - Mary_Algen_Guiang111dReplied to
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
No, she couldn't know how he can recall even the tiniest details about the life of the knight and her queen. How he started dreaming of another world, of another time, of another them ever since he has met her. - Mary_Algen_Guiang111dReplied to Jany_Calypse
hahahhaa exactlyyy! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
He frowned and tipped her chin, forcing her blue orbs on him, "I hate that you are hiding me from your family. They have to know the person their child will marry." - Mary_Algen_Guiang111dReplied to Jany_Calypse
hahahaha indeed! 😍😍😍😍😍
His grades were fine, he was just never vocal about it. He is one of the blessed students who pass their exams even when they do not study for them. - Mary_Algen_Guiang111dReplied to Jany_CalypseCh 36 ii. Doll [Bonus chapter]
- Mary_Algen_Guiang111dReplied to Jany_Calypse
hahahaha! you have to continue reading and find out! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
He sniffed her scent and lovingly kissed her forehead, "You don't have to be scared, there is no way in this world I'll change. My feelings for you are far greater than you can imagine. And I know you don't believe this now, but please let me. Let me prove to you how much I love you. Just stay still and let me love you the only way I know how to. Completely and devotedly so." - Mary_Algen_Guiang114dReplied to Jany_Calypse
that is my favorite world as well 💕
He chuckled, hating that she indeed never thought of the scenes running on his mind 24/7 since meeting her. Porn movies have nothing on how dirty his mind has been converted by her presence. - Mary_Algen_Guiang115dReplied to Jany_Calypse
thank you! 😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️
"You will never be invisible to me, Mary. You have to keep this in mind, you will never be nothing to me. The truth is, you are the only one who ever mattered. There is no one I care for more than you. No smile is more precious to me than yours, no voice is more calming, and no eyes I would rather get lost in than those pretty orbs," he hugged her and squeezed her small body against his muscles. - Mary_Algen_Guiang115dReplied to Jany_Calypse"I know you will keep me safe, Dom. I trust you with all of me. I love you, so terribly much so," she confessed and clung to his neck as he swooped in for another kiss.
- Mary_Algen_Guiang115dReplied to Jany_Calypse
trueeees! my wish toooo! 😭😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️
He never realized laughter can be not annoying until now. He kissed her hair again and looked into her eyes, "From now on, I will protect you. I won't let anyone or anything hurt you. I will protect you with all of me, and with all that I have. I will keep you safe, my queen. So you better stay close to me." - Mary_Algen_Guiang115dReplied to Jany_Calypse"Good that you do. Because I am absolutely in love with you too, my dear knight," she caressed his cheek as she stared longingly at him.
- Mary_Algen_Guiang115dReplied to Jany_Calypse
this is lovey-dovey 😍😍❤️
"I thought it was obvious. Everyone apparently can see how absolutely whipped I am for you. I love you with all my heart, queenie," he said sincerely. - Mary_Algen_Guiang115dReplied to Jany_Calypse"Time for her to catch up with the feelings I have for her. Time for her to like me back, to fall for me as much as I have fallen in love with her. Time for her to see me the way I see her," at that instant how he wished he could tell her. It was her all along. The girl he liked from the start.
- Mary_Algen_Guiang115dReplied to Jany_Calypse
ahahahhaa trueeee trueeee 😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️
"Is she stupid?" she verbalized her dissatisfaction. How can anyone not know when someone like Dominus likes them?