Review Detail of kathleenneko in Her mercy to His penitence

Hello Humeyra! I've read the 1st Chapter and two thumbs up for you![img=recommend] It was such a good opening for the story, the first part was quite heavy of course because it was about suicide but as the narration goes it became lighter and warmer. The story was intriguing, because imagining how Jasmine was living her life in the present versus imagining how she used to be in the past was a total opposite sides. I love the way you narrate your story, the flow of your narration was smooth and easy to understand. And as what you have said, this story was not yet edited so it's understandable that some sentence didn't start with a capital letters. all in all it was a great chapter to start the story and to catch the attention of the readers. Keep up the good work! Looking forward for the next chapters.