Reviews of Heavenly Saga

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I’like the start but sadly I can’t continue reading because of the names. Seriously Fräulein Wunderschön , Verräter von Stark or our Mc Kraftvoll xD The world Niedrigere Welt (auch noch falsch geschrieben) and the region Krieg Verwüstet ? Thats to much for me but otherwise a good start.

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I like everything abou the story except for your writing style. No offence but you write like a child. The sentences are awkward and you keep using the wrong tense. I can understand grammatical errors, but please fix your sentence structures. If you can do that, your story has the potential to be one of the best on this app.

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can't wait for what happens next. love the character of Kelly she seems to be a really good friend, and understands how much this means to Abigail.

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The novel is good but please change the cover its like im looking at a tentacles instead of dragons why violet bro you can use orange😂😂 XD just chage the cover and we'll good 😁

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