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Heavenly Dao's Chosen (Old, rewriting it)

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What is Heavenly Dao's Chosen (Old, rewriting it)

Read Heavenly Dao's Chosen (Old, rewriting it) novel written by the author GoldenStrider on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Eastern Fantasy stories, covering action, adventure, reincarnation, weaktostrong, cultivation. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Maxwell was once hailed as a child prodigy, but everything changed after he and fiancé stumbled upon a cultivator's tomb and his fiancé awakened her constitution. He could no longer cultivate and everyone bullied him and his sister. He never gave up and instead trained. After 10 years of struggling he finally managed to breakthrough, soon he would shock the entire continent. {There will be at most 2000 words per chapter and I will release 5 chapters a week. Right now I'll give a bonus chapter for 50 Power Stones and then 100.} [This is my first novel, I hope you like it and I appreciate any feedback, At the start the story is a bit shaky but I hope you read further when I improve it.] [The cover art is AI generated :) from Midjourney]

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GoldenStrider
GoldenStriderAuthorGoldenStrider

I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 stars. I hope you stick through the first 5 chapters at least before deciding if you like my book or not. I strive to improve my writing every chapter and I would love honest feedback.

GoldenStrider
GoldenStriderAuthorGoldenStrider

I hope you read at least a few chapters before deciding whether you like it or not since the first few are a little bit fast paced and the conversations are not that smooth. I will try to upload at least 5 chapters a week and improve my writing quality every chapter. Each chapter will be around 2000 words

Ueko_Ahsaka
Ueko_AhsakaLv2Ueko_Ahsaka

Hi, I personally think it's a really enjoyable story! I'm not sure how to describe it, but the jargon that you're using sets me in the world fast. Really nice stuff instead of spelling it out, haha! By the way, how did you come up with the name Orphelia? I really like the ring to it!

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusLv4Shadow_Magus

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Ninestar619_5803
Ninestar619_5803Lv4Ninestar619_5803

Wow This book is too great and can't be ignored. The writing quality is soo awesome that it hoks yiu and you barely can leave it. The story is too interesting, action and strong that it burns you to read on just by looking at the book cover. Loved the plot. Good luck author

Ninestar619_5803
Ninestar619_5803Lv4Ninestar619_5803

Pretty awesome start. This book is so great. The plot is very interesting that it hooks you from pages to pages. I asume there will be a lot to read from this story. Not to mention, the writing style is simply and easy understanding. Great work author

Ink_Quanta
Ink_QuantaLv12Ink_Quanta

The story development looks wonderful...I took an overview and it seems nice.... everything seems so clear to understand...names of characters are no difficult to carry-on with....

Demons_and_I
Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

This book reminds me of the old cultivation novels... It's nice. There aren't many bad points in the novel. The grammar and punctuation are both decent. Proper spacing and sentence structuring. My only issue with it is that it feels a bit rushed. The chapter lengths are good in my own opinion but it just feels a bit rushed. Dialogue isn't a lot, and feel stiff as well... Altogether it is very good, but would be even better if these issues addressed...

RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4RomanceFanatic028

I know I am late for the review, but I actually enjoyed reading it. So far, I could only read 3 chapters, but I really liked the plot. If this is your first book, then it is an good effort. The mc seems little twisted to me. But overall, everything is good. All the best Author

Rainandstorm
RainandstormLv2Rainandstorm

Even though is your first novel, have already seen a future in it, not that am a judge or anything Hahaha 😆😆... The point is that I really do love your book, it really interesting, the prologue alone got be questioning, Please do keep on updating, I love your book so much 😅😅

Junni_MC
Junni_MCLv13Junni_MC

The stories are good but I think the story needs a bit more development but the rest is ok keep doing a good job author[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Currer
CurrerLv3Currer

Great book! The writing is fast paced but not confusing. The characters are well written as well. I'm really enjoying this and can't wait to see where it goes! Would recommend!!

KexoHD
KexoHDLv1KexoHD

Its pretty good and has a little potential Im not really sure what to say about it but the creativity is decently so I hope you can continue

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