Review Detail of Demons_and_I in Heavenly Dao's Chosen (Old, rewriting it)

This book reminds me of the old cultivation novels... It's nice. There aren't many bad points in the novel. The grammar and punctuation are both decent. Proper spacing and sentence structuring. My only issue with it is that it feels a bit rushed. The chapter lengths are good in my own opinion but it just feels a bit rushed. Dialogue isn't a lot, and feel stiff as well... Altogether it is very good, but would be even better if these issues addressed...