Reviews of Harry Potter: New World

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Great potential , the character and his background are realistic (in the world of hp) and the characters feels like the originals ( with this i mean that the characters are well portrayed).

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Nice nice niCe very very nice

Story wise I only got to chapter 20, I understand English isn’t your first language and that’s fine. It’s not my first either, but the plot points and character explanation is plain. There’s no world building, only plain expository text. Like “the Hogwarts building” or the “city of London” don’t get me wrong you did a good job in diagon alley. But you didn’t go into complete details. And the scene of which a mother forgets her son’s face, yet the father remembers it. It but odd really. In the end I’ve decided to drop it. Chapter 20 is way to confusing, random appearance of “creatures” and boredom have left no where to go. So I’m dropping it.

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Great story so far. Loving so far. Can't wait for him killing Lucius, hehehe. Please, don't drop! Thanks for a great story! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

Horrible have no idea how the reviews are all 4-5 stars couldn't make it past the 11th chapter summary of the first 10 chapters:

This story is hot garbage every review is lying. If u don’t believe me just take the time to read the first 7 chapters. The story is so bad in the chapter comments most readers can even make it past the 10 chapter rule before dropping

It's good and bad in my regard .it's good because I love the whole character that more sensible to not interfere in the whole story line . I hate it because most of these harry potter stories are in hogwarts I wish they can try a new approach in like the france school or usa school .Maybe it's just me who is fed up with harry potter fanfictions .

Pretty good to pass the time and get into. I would recommend this book over some of the other Harry Potter fanfics out. So far this is a nice read and I look forward to what's next

The story by it selve is great. The characters are well developed and the worldbuilding is great. My only real problem lies with the writing style. You can tell the Author tries to use a lot complex words and sentences, completely forgetting, making some parts extremely hard to understand and can make for a tiresome read. In dialogues this is an even bigger Problem as even young kids tend to use words only adults would use. A classic case of less is better then more i guess... Still a fun read at times.

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Just finish the latest and I notice that he kind of mentioning alot about the nightmare right? Would you do some glossary for anything he got from the nightmare? Kind of like auxiliary chapter for the list of stuff he gain from the dream?

Credit to the author, and thank you to the person who posted this in webnovel. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Not worth the read. Confusing and rushed most of the time. Putting aside how it was wrote. The character from the beginning behave totally out of context Most of the dialogs are nonsensical and difficult to follow. I dropped at the beggining after 10/20 chapters I couldn’t keep going

This story is confusing. I can't understand how things are happening and how one act transits to another.

Read up to C292. Is it boring? Yes. Is it entertaining enough to pass time? Yes. The writing quality is sometimes worse than a Chinese MTL and sometimes better. The MC is for like 150+ chapters bland and boring, the Author said its cause he has Occlumency running 24/7. Plots are forced and riddled with holes, not to mention that most of them leave the MC as incompetent and stupid. Plots are also pretty boring even if you ignore the fact that they are forced and riddled with holes. For example the Malfoy drama etc. MC is spending 90% of his time reading books, accumulating knowledge etc., which for a Harry Potter MC is my favorite type, but only if the MC does something interesting with that knowledge which in this Fanfiction is not the case, except for one time to solve a problem that came from one of the forced plots. He doesn't research anything interesting or new, an Artifact/Item or new Spell etc. Most new/interesting Spells are from his Grimoire. His special Blood Magic which he has since awakening Magic is only getting attention/development at 280+ chapters except using it here and there once a while to deal with otherwise deadly problems.

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