Review Detail of CrowMoonrise in Harry Potter: New World

Read up to C292. Is it boring? Yes. Is it entertaining enough to pass time? Yes. The writing quality is sometimes worse than a Chinese MTL and sometimes better. The MC is for like 150+ chapters bland and boring, the Author said its cause he has Occlumency running 24/7. Plots are forced and riddled with holes, not to mention that most of them leave the MC as incompetent and stupid. Plots are also pretty boring even if you ignore the fact that they are forced and riddled with holes. For example the Malfoy drama etc. MC is spending 90% of his time reading books, accumulating knowledge etc., which for a Harry Potter MC is my favorite type, but only if the MC does something interesting with that knowledge which in this Fanfiction is not the case, except for one time to solve a problem that came from one of the forced plots. He doesn't research anything interesting or new, an Artifact/Item or new Spell etc. Most new/interesting Spells are from his Grimoire. His special Blood Magic which he has since awakening Magic is only getting attention/development at 280+ chapters except using it here and there once a while to deal with otherwise deadly problems.