Reviews of Harry Potter and the Secret Treasures
Harry Potter and the Secret Treasures
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why are you saying it's complete, this story has over a thousand chapters. it would be nice if you did the translation of the rest. most other traditions are shit.
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Love the story but hate the fking premise behind it, for those who will try reaching it for the 1st time, do what I say right here and the story will be way better : forget everything about the MC being reincarnated and having read the books and u will find the story 100% more enjoyable... The MC has more than 25 years old (soul) and has knowledge about the story but he fking behaves like a 10 year old child that even after knowing that he is in HP world doesn't train nor tries to learn things that may help him... It annoyed me so much that I just gave up on trying to reason with his reincarnation Don't think I hate the story, I truly enjoy this story it has a different feeling cause MC actually goes adventuring with friends and all. It also has a great development in my opinion I just hate this premise because honestly I would love to be in his place but the story doesn't demonstrates that, in everything else it's one of the best fanfics for HP fans
its a good fanfic considering all the other harry potter fan fics, but like the author made the characters cry way to much. from what i can remember theres like 6 scenes throughout all the movies where people actually cry, and a handfull in the books. way to emotional. But considering all the others its probably the best harry potter fan fic
Problem with this fanfic that it just doesn't make sense. Mc is supposed to be reincarnated and know the plot. But author basically decided to stick to original plot, so what happens is that mc is artificially made retard so he can't change to plot (even though story tells us he is smart). And any small changes that actually happen, get somehow corrected so that plot again steers to originals. Nothing just makes sense. Mc ignores obvious solutions to his problems, just so that author doesn't have to bother actually writing something original. Honestly story is actually written well, but problem is that even if you can write, it means nothing if the story you are writing is nonsense. Maybe the most plain example is Prisoner of azkaban arc. All mc needed to do is to secretly go stun Peter, give him sleep potion or something, and bring him to Dumbledore so Sirius name could be cleared. Mc's plans were really bad in first place, but every time there was actually chance to do something for some idiotic coincidence it didn't happen, all to somehow preserve original storyline. Like when he gave peter to ron when he was raging, or when the map was opened.
I think I've read this before and I'm sure there's machine translation of this fanfic as well. There's also evil gods in this if I'm not wrong, and how is the novel completed? This novel is far from completion and you have only posted translated chapters. I should be around 930+ chapter and I've put that on halt since 6 months because I want the translations to catch up. If you can, how about wording it better than machine translated and then post it? Remove the completed tag, its not completed.
I read about 50 chapters before giving up. Overall, it was well written, but it felt like you were reading the original Harry Potter book, only from a different perspective. The main character does not influence the events in any way at all, and does not do anything of his own, with the exception of the newspaper, which also quickly becomes boring, especially since somewhere I already saw a fanfic in which the hero was also carried away by the newspaper, but there it was an auxiliary image, and not the plot. Conclusion - you can read it, but I’m not interested.
