Review Detail of rodrigo_melo in Harry Potter and the Secret Treasures

awfully mediocre The MC is what you expect from a Mc from a Harry Potter FF, perfect, is always right, good looking, is overpowered, and take credits for things other characters did. The author change some things in the story like the fight against the basilisk, but in the end it was just the same. Like the majority of FF i saw, this one treats Ron like an idiot, even tho he is as smart as Harry. The dialogs are chessy and forced, there is sometimes where i think is going to be just a simple conversation and in the end turn out is a very long and boring coversations, that happens mostly in fights and the MC is always on the right side. Like i said before, the MC is too op, he is only in the second year of school and is already stronger than most students, and there ins't any development for that either. I'd said this FF have what any other generic FF of Harry Potter has, but is bellow average because the dialogs are way too cringe.