Sonet
Well written and structured with an intriguong new take on old characters. That said, as soon as the training wheels of the original canon came off the and Mc had his first adventure it became something akin to twilight fanfiction on its worst day. Dropped and never looking at this again. Truly a disappointment
I followed this story since the beginning and quite enjoyed the plot and steady development of mc to opness. All of a sudden the author just slapped in a uber op transmigrated nemesis for our protagonist and that just felt very sour, cause before that point the mc was the only other worldly being and here comes this new character who also transmigrated in to HP is is op af. So yeah f... this story and the randomness of the plot.
AMAZING...that's all i have to say but unfortunately or fortunately writing 140 words is required, I will say that this fan-fic is the single most fabulous fan-fic i've found all this time. if not for the slow updates i would give it a full 5 star rating and that is saying a lot cuz i do not like harem very much.yet somehow i don't mind it here even going so far as to say that i low-key enjoy it. everything is well thought out and nicely done although the author does make the mc overly arrogant and i hope he reels it in a bit. i also hope for stable updates more than anything.
I like the story and enjoy your take on the HP verse....for constructive criticism, there were times i believe you nerfed or dear mc at times and also made him from smart to dumb....but overall it is a good story and amazing genius is needed to make such a good novel out of an already amazing book.....also.....i would very much like...no demand....that you continue this novel and finish it.....i have been around a while and have seen too many promising and amazing fan fics die out without being completed so please .....finish the novel and thank you for the experience.
The story is really good and the characters are really likeable, I enjoyed the take on Draco and the influence he has on his family and his relationship with the golden trio. But, when the author introduced another reincarnated character the story went downhill fast and personally I think it was a mistake. Itโs still readable though.
Man what more will I say. It is amazing and has its own features and is far from following the Canon... If not for the update release being a bit slow like its sometimes 2 to 3 chapters per week... It would have been great.... I would advice the author that on reaching a critical or climax point in the story to mass release and not leave the readers Cliff-hanging....Overall it is one of the best fanfiction out there.....