I like the story and enjoy your take on the HP verse....for constructive criticism, there were times i believe you nerfed or dear mc at times and also made him from smart to dumb....but overall it is a good story and amazing genius is needed to make such a good novel out of an already amazing book.....also.....i would very much like...no demand....that you continue this novel and finish it.....i have been around a while and have seen too many promising and amazing fan fics die out without being completed so please .....finish the novel and thank you for the experience.
Sonet
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