BlackFlamer
I had a great time reading this novel. I do feel like this novel was rushed and was completed probably earlier than what the Author had wanted to do since there were many MC wives that did not appear at all and it just seemed overall rushed which is fair since he has irl stuff to do. The ending is chapter is def something I enjoyed and wished all novels had lol. I recommend this Novel for sure. Hope the author can write some side story for his missing characters when he has time.
Very good harem story! But you forgot Rias! The demon empress! Where is she author! And you didnโt even mention the names of the archangel wives that he has, You didnโt mention End being in the final session that they have and her children. Besides, in the beginning of the story, you mentioned that he has more than 40 wives, not including the new ones, so who are they and where are they author? And as the greatest being in his universe, Kai should be able to revive the dead ones including Lana and Kana, which just died years after he came back. It should be possible for him to fish them up in the river of time(I added this assuming there should be one). It is really a very good story and very exciting to see Kai rise up from the mortal realm to the highest realm he could reach but you could have made a better epilogue mentioning all of his wives and not forgetting a single one of them. Pleaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeee!!! Make epilogue 2.0 for the forgotten wivesssss.
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This is one of the only eastern fantasy cultivation novels I have enjoyed so cheers to the author for doing such a great job. Would love to join the discord to lurk and refer to pictures of the characters as I continue reading but every link I find for the discord is expired. if someone or even the author if they have time could get me a newer link that would be greatly appreciated ๐ P.S. I love all the little sweet moments between kai and his women that pop up outside of the sax stuff, please keep that going! ๐
The only issue: grammar. Plot: interesting, you easily play around with God-ruled world and the use of Harem is more interesting than it usually is. Once I have more time, I'll try to finish the story since I got curious. Despite some issues I saw, I could easily imagine the story as I'm reading it making me more and more glad that I picked it up. I wish you the best with this novel!