Carrots123
I was going to give you 4 stars on the updates section, bringing the average to 4.8, but then I noticed how many other stories you are working on at the same time. I highly recommend this , Fanfiction. I try not to comment until all of the published work has been read, but now that it has been read, I allow myself to review this work. The author has written a truly pure Fanfiction in my opinion. He has not included elements from other worlds but has adapted his own plot doing justice to the characters and the ASOIAF world. There is a lot of work behind it and it shows. Although I do not agree with some of the interpretations of the characters , I also cannot dispute them since the author himself George R.R. Martin did not leave us with enough elements to rely on and therefore the evolution of these factors is absolutely justified in my opinion. Strategies of Battle, political plots and the details to facilitate understanding making the reading smooth is, in my opinion, the highlight of this beautiful work. Congratulations to Carrots123
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Tired And Moody. It’s the best way to describe this fanfic. I felt pity for main character. This FF is heavily Political. At first, it was on healthier level alongside battles. But it keeps getting too much. I felt Bad for Mc, he himself admitted he wanted to run away somewhere. Even his married life is Politically challenged. He just can’t catch a break ( I read up to chap 137, felt too worned out and gave up )
Tou know the Jon fics where the plot doesn't really change ? It's seem after one volume that's the same. I can of course be wrong with the other chapters (100), but the beginning keeps giving me this feeling of knowing the plot whereas it's an AU fics where the plot have to be different that what we saw in the show. Because it's difficult to me to keep reading after this first volume I can't promise that I will edit this review if I'll be wrong.