Zelenesenki
That was a nice read. I particularly like how the author creates a rough and tough exterior for the world, but preserves warmth in the core of the plot. I must also commend the author's attention to detail in character design. A good quality story here, however I would advice that the wording and length of sentences be simplified just a little so as to communicate efficiently with your audience. Great job[img=recommend]
The author clearly spent lots of time on world building and the language is really beautiful at times. We're introduced to all kinds of creative characters and creatures. The chapters are a bit long though. A lot is going on in every chapter and it would better if the chapters were cut in half. But overall, it's a great story that the author clearly put his heart and soul into!
The writing was seriously good, albeit there are some grammatical tense errors! The author has a wonderful way of crafing a whole world. Everything about this world you can tell is very well thought out from even the species of some characters, the hints of politics, and the details on the food for heaven's sake lol. It's all very well thought out! I can say I was pulled in. The first chapter was fairly long but it does a good job of showing the world and the characters. I will try to continue reading more chapters because needless to say this was a very interesting story so far. Readers should def check this out!