That was a nice read. I particularly like how the author creates a rough and tough exterior for the world, but preserves warmth in the core of the plot. I must also commend the author's attention to detail in character design. A good quality story here, however I would advice that the wording and length of sentences be simplified just a little so as to communicate efficiently with your audience. Great job[img=recommend]
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