Reviews of FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION

The story is a bit fast paced and jumps scenes alot, but it still makes sense. The plot, I am absolutely in love with. I also like how it ends on cliffhangers; it leaves the reader wanting more. What I don't like about the story is that the point of view changes; a story should really only ever have one set point of view for the entire thing. Having multiple points of views can easily confuse a reader which can cause a rift between the reader's attention and the storyline. There are a few grammatical errors but there is also good word usage. I would highly recommend for everyone to give this story a chance. I look forward to seeing how the story plays out.

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10 chapters, all down in one go because Katrina's character is so beautiful, the prologue the language, the concept, this book is has an amazing plot! HONESTLY one that id love to read and for which im adding to my library so i can continue with the latest updates as u go on if you plan to ! ^-^ thank u!!

Wow a nice concept and a unique take on angels. Having read the synopsis so far made me curious about what will happen to the lead. I recommend this novel to all who wants to read this. Good job author and good luck!

I found this story really a nice one! Even if the story goes very fast paced, almost skipping some scenes- it's okay and can be mendable. I hope the writer can keep writing and improve, letting us to dive into the story which can make us never forget it. 😊 👉👈

Wow***w really wonderful novel especially when the fl had power(naniii!!). i loved how the author make the topic for every chapter simple(seriously i love it but huhuhu i did long one for my novel huhuhu). keep up with the good work щ(゜ロ゜щ)щ(゜ロ゜щ)ヾ(*’Ｏ’*)/ヾ(*’Ｏ’*)/✧\(>o<)ﾉ✧✧\(>o<)ﾉ✧✧\(>o<)ﾉ✧

I love the flow of the story, it looks so much interesting especially the clffhangers, I love how you write the flow of the story, smooth and understandable, Im so looking forward to this until the end, its a woderful story, keep on writing

The book is written very well and I hope you'll update very soon as well! I haven't finished it yet, but I'd love to read more of the chapters of your story :D

A really nice fantasy story here. It's been a long time since I last read a fantasy about Archangels so this one really picked my attention. The plot is a bit fast-paced, but overall it's a story with great potential. Keep it up, dear author!

Yo, I read your story and the intro is so well written. It has this poetic flow that attracts the writers. Well done with that. So far, from what I have read your story has an interesting plot!

What an engrossing start to this tale! After witnessing an angel changing into its winged form, the protagonist is drawn into a wild, otherworldly adventure. I look forward to finding out who tried to burn her alive in her house. Seems to be some sinister forces at play. Keep up the quality work!

Description wise, it is very well written. But sometimes I'm confused as to who is speaking. A little inconsistency with the phasing of third or first or if it was the main character's thoughts. It would be helpful to put single quotation marks if you want to highlight the character's inner voice (just a suggestion). Also the tenses are sometimes are inconsistent. But all those are just normal and it will be easy to correct. Overall, the story is good. I'm interested about their connection to each other. I'd keep reading and look forward to more of your story. Keep it up. I wish you the best!

A relaxing novel to read. I like how the writer describes the environment and emotion of the characters well in every phrase. The story is intriguing to make you want to read more. Can't wait for an update!

Damnnnnn! This story is lit! It just absorbed me into it from chapter. I am not sure about it's future but I know that it's potential is unlimited. Can't wait for the next chapters[img=update]

wow this novel is so cool. The writing is really neat and the language is easy to understand. From the beginning I liked the story. Interesting, continued

The synopsis alone just pulls me to read this fantasy book. The cliffhangers just make me want to keep reading the character's point of view just gives me their perspective and I love that makes me understand each character better. the writing is beautiful and amazing. I wish I saw this book sooner.

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