Review Detail of Lynnifer_Ice in FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION

The story is a bit fast paced and jumps scenes alot, but it still makes sense. The plot, I am absolutely in love with. I also like how it ends on cliffhangers; it leaves the reader wanting more. What I don't like about the story is that the point of view changes; a story should really only ever have one set point of view for the entire thing. Having multiple points of views can easily confuse a reader which can cause a rift between the reader's attention and the storyline. There are a few grammatical errors but there is also good word usage. I would highly recommend for everyone to give this story a chance. I look forward to seeing how the story plays out.