Wahi
So nice story, I like the idea and the story, but I dont know about the grammar, it is something between normal and mtl level. The author after hundreds of chapters still has no clue how time works, he does so many mistakes, its absurd. Sometimes he use present and simple past in one sentence, the future and simple past in one sentence, some chapters, I cant really read them because they are so many mistakes! Author get a proof reader, use some apps to help you or some AI idk, just get better
it is one of the better xianxia novels out there and was a pretty entertaining read....but the mc personality is not for me and despite denying it is righteous and not someone with a thief or cultivator mindset especially after all that he has experienced ..sigh...it is disappointing as I had rather high hopes for this.. anyways the novel in itself is good for light hearted reading or a good laugh... this is a good novel author but not for me ....
The storyline is good. However, what gets me is the use of present tense and past tense. I thought I could just overlook it, but it happens continuously, and I have read more than 100 chapters. Here, I am reading and correcting every present tense that should be past tense. I do not actually know if I can still read this just because of that. The storyline practically follows the generic 'i am going against the heavens because dah dah dah' so I mean I am not missing out if i discontinue reading but man I put effort into reading this. Ace is likable, but I found his growth and mindset development weird, and he trusts too easily, but I guess that is just me. I don't know, man. Author san for what you created, you are amazing as I do not have the ability to create a whole new world for readers to emerse themselves into, but please get an editor.
It's a really good book. Different from the stereotype mc, this dude matures. And his plot armour is within logic. The character design and world background are sort of fresh and stable. It might be a Harem(not yet opened,but will soon I think), but unlike usual mc is not an idiot that goes around every beauty. In short it's well written till now(461). good job author 👍👍