Review Detail of _athena_ in Eternal Thief

The storyline is good. However, what gets me is the use of present tense and past tense. I thought I could just overlook it, but it happens continuously, and I have read more than 100 chapters. Here, I am reading and correcting every present tense that should be past tense. I do not actually know if I can still read this just because of that. The storyline practically follows the generic 'i am going against the heavens because dah dah dah' so I mean I am not missing out if i discontinue reading but man I put effort into reading this. Ace is likable, but I found his growth and mindset development weird, and he trusts too easily, but I guess that is just me. I don't know, man. Author san for what you created, you are amazing as I do not have the ability to create a whole new world for readers to emerse themselves into, but please get an editor.