mythosarcana
Writing quality: There are very few minor mistakes, the grammar is really good and you cannot really complain about it Character design: He is a kind soul, which a lovely mother, his childhoos is sweet and hard at the same time, but as the story you will see him grow up, and it makes even sense! No stupid character, no unnessesary face slapping, I like how he grows, how he behaves, and cant wait too see more Stoey development: Given a second chance in a new world, he has to grow up from an innocent child to a strong cultivator, the beginning is a bit harder to read but get over it! At some point you can clearly see the flow of the story of this masterpiece Update stability: 3 chapters a week are good but I truly wish for more World background: nothing known of as for now, only some basics
I think it’s a great story I am disappointed it went the harem route but apart from that I like everything else. I suggest posting this story on other platforms to gain popularity, as the way it is currently set up even if people like the story they can’t justify paying for chapters as they would need to unlock close to a 1000 chapters, so it would increase your fan base if this story was in more platforms being read by more people whilst being more easily accessible without the pay wall
overall, I have greatly enjoyed the first 100 chapters. New experience seeing the MC deal with his heart demons. most novels mcs don't even have this issues. I feel I've over invested into a story I will be dropping due to coin costs for novels these days. if you can afford to, give this book a chance. 103 free chapters to try and draw you in!!
around 50 chapter in and not much sign of harem (2 potential were even deflected). this is really good and but it look like it lack popularity. the synopsis honestly sound generic although i admit that i can't think any better. the conflict is well thought out without using those brain dead cliches villain (no father, grandfather, elder, and ancestors coming to get you). there is no system, power mostly come from pure godlike talent and hardwork.