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Your book is so magical just like the world where Lily live. I always dreamt of having to encounter such stories that focuses on witchcraft and sorcery. I love how you describe each and everyone of the characters (and Lily is obviously my favorite hehe) and your story style is unique enough for me to keep on reading. I'm excited with the nest chapters that you'll published soon! I hope Lily successfully retrieved the grimoire from the hands of Salem with no casualty. I believe in her just like how I believe that you are a great author. See you soon!
The novel has a good plot and it appears promising. The author is too good in depicting the emotions portrayed by the characters. The background world build up looks superb. I am totally in love with the FL . If you ask me to express my view in a word, that would be "AMAZING" Keep up the good work author.
I loved it I have to say it. The way the synopsis is written and arranged that give an ambiguous yet an idea about the story really makes a reader want to save your work and read it completely . I wish you all the best and really do keep posting for more. I will complete reading the chapter by then . Thanks for writing.. you're so natural.
Thanks Author for this adventure and exciting story. I am up till chapter 18 but still would like to drop my review first. 1. Wow! i like the adventure Lily is going through. Initial setup is good - the first encounter at the woods, use of pentagon flame to travel back to castle and the faithful killer soft toy with nine lives! Great stuff. The different magician tools, method, spell usage eg invinsible dusk - all added colours to the story including tarrot cards - rich in content. 2. The second part was filled with excitement where the attack of the castle took place and before that the removal of the magicians due to the King’s decree. The transition from one plot to another is done nicely so i can visualized each scene clearly. 3. Drawing out relationship connection with characters - Zeke and Hazel hidden love, Hazel and Lily close and sisterly / motherly bond. Killer and Lily subordinate alike, Sorreal, Aunt Heather and their struggle, disbelieve on trying to train Lily - all clearly described and i am able to read and feel it. 4. Sufficient details for reader to visualize each scene - descriptive. 5. All in all i enjoyed reading this, turning the chapters. Pls Keep up the good work👍 look fwd to see how the overall story will continue to unfold.