Review Detail of NorthStar in Enclave of Kings: Nightshade's Revenge

Thanks Author for this adventure and exciting story. I am up till chapter 18 but still would like to drop my review first. 1. Wow! i like the adventure Lily is going through. Initial setup is good - the first encounter at the woods, use of pentagon flame to travel back to castle and the faithful killer soft toy with nine lives! Great stuff. The different magician tools, method, spell usage eg invinsible dusk - all added colours to the story including tarrot cards - rich in content. 2. The second part was filled with excitement where the attack of the castle took place and before that the removal of the magicians due to the King’s decree. The transition from one plot to another is done nicely so i can visualized each scene clearly. 3. Drawing out relationship connection with characters - Zeke and Hazel hidden love, Hazel and Lily close and sisterly / motherly bond. Killer and Lily subordinate alike, Sorreal, Aunt Heather and their struggle, disbelieve on trying to train Lily - all clearly described and i am able to read and feel it. 4. Sufficient details for reader to visualize each scene - descriptive. 5. All in all i enjoyed reading this, turning the chapters. Pls Keep up the good work👍 look fwd to see how the overall story will continue to unfold.