Reviews of Embers Ver.II

This story is strong. Strong characters, strong world, a good plot and a certain talent for writing to give you the right amount of information in the right place to take you where the author wants you to go. Don't hesitate, it really captures your attention !

Pretty good, I'll like the humor embedded within the story and the short tempered dragon will bring lots of it, there are very few typos and misuser words so in my opinion it passes with flying colors.

Ok, I already love the leading lady. You don't usually see fierce leasing women. Authors have started to get around to that idea, but really love that. That's the first thought I had. The second one was amazing plot line so far. I hope this continues to stay that way!!! I'm excited to read the next chapter. I do want to add I'm the user BellaandLexShow on the forum!!!

This is wonderful, I'm totally in love with this book... The plot is interesting, the style of writing is more than unique, and I'm totally hooked by the characters... The book is already in my library, and I can't stop myself from being addicted [img=update]

Wow! First review! I am from review swap and I will review yours. In turn, Please vote with power stones on my book The Grandmaster's Rebirth. Your novel was in good hands and I know it will become great later on. With talent and skills accompanied with Hard work, you will find success!.....your loving reader here!