Just the first chapter is a major alarm bell. Making it 15k words of nothing, being repeated just so your book is there, taking anyone's time away for those unknowing is a red flag. I went to keep reading, onto the setting.
Nothing is decided on there, there's nothing showing how the main character looks, unlike you stated, and after 9 chapters, you'd figure at least the Armour, basic weaponry, and other common things would be decided already, but nope.
And then, my most agravating problem with this, is no grammar being fixed, and worst of all, not punctuating things with ",', or even , so far.
And then there's not spacing paragraphs out!!! I'm sorry, if English is not your first language, but if you intend on writing something IN English, then take a class for Punctuation, writing, and probably a little on the English subject as well.
The idea is great, it's just the way you go about it needs to be fixed, and don't ever post another '1st' Chapter containing 15 thousand words of absolute nonsense being repeated. Take the time to write a first chapter that's good AS a first chapter, make it relevant to the story you plan on going for. I said my piece.
