Reviews of eFate: An MMO Story
eFate: An MMO Story
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Definetly worth reading. I'd write a longer review but I tried once already but someone called halfway through and the text got deleted. Cbb now :DDDDDD
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Have been enjoying this story very much. I like the authors descriptive style, dialog, and the way it reminds me of when I first started playing wow. The interaction between the different players has been fun so far and with a good variety of personalities. Hopefully the updates are consistent and plenty.
So, where to begin. Let’s start with the writing quality; I can confidently say that this novel’s vocabulary, grammar and sentence structuring are in the top 1%, making binge-reading just a treat. Definitely 5/5. Next is the update stability, but there’s not much to say here. Author has delivered time and time again, and even when the updates slowed down his/her consistency hasn’t gone down even a bit. 5/5 here too. Here it gets a little complicated: character design and story development. As there haven’t been that many released chapters yet, and the story is moving neither slow nor fast, I can’t say there has been much development in the story. So, 4/5 for now. As for the characters, all the ones that have been introduced so far have received fairly little development, again owing to the small number of released chapters. I’d also like to add that I really enjoy how the MC is only fairly talented and is more than willing to put in the work to get better. 4.5/5 I guess. As for the world background, it is a fairly standard fantasy world as of now, with elves, orcs, goblins etc. I’m sure, however, that the author will add something new and original, which I can’t wait for. 4/5 here. Overall this novel has great potential that is already showing, making me wonder why it’s so low on the power rankings, as well as hope its rank will go up soon. Great job and keep it up, author!!
This novel has a lot going on for it: a RPG with very original rules that the characters (and readers) discover little by little and characters that feel real and have interactions I could have with my friends. They don't feel overpowered and their skills and strong points are backed by logic, there is no plot armor or reincarnation bull****.
Well written story. No OP system or cheat 😭 but also non-creepy interaction with girls 🖒😁. The MMO seems interesting enough, I feel bad for non-athletic/sporty people though, since the general playstyle is not unlike other VRMMOs. Probably one of its main selling points are the MMO's easy to use magic system and it having no classes, making a more flexible playstyle. No Min -maxing here. Dissapointing but still okay. Definitely one of the better writtin fics on this site. Up there with Reborn (#1 PS Rank) in terms of its writing quality, heck maybe even better. Rating: 4/5.
After reading i don't know how many 1000 of chapters on this App and others, i write my first commend on this Novel i readed since it started to help promote it. That alone should already say a lot. The story is quite low paced because there is a tremendous amount of groundwork beeing done, from character delvelopment over world building to the magic system. Everything is sound (especially the MC and Side characters are realy well made for a story like this). Currently there is no OPness going on for the main character (when he was questing with friends of him, one of these friends got a great rare skill and not him for example). Only down side is the slow Update rate, but i guess this is actually high considering how much planing prop. goes into this and that this isn't just translating but real writing (other Authors here just put up real high standartds in update rate). You should defently give it a try and read at least the first few chapter until the tutorial is over...
So im a sucker for magic systems and i love this magic system i see a lot of people complain about how come he doesnt experiment more with runes but it seems pretty clear backlash is severe especially for gamers who are trying to get a head and grind for the leaderboard. At times i think there are too many characters but they are all being developed really well they just needed to be introduced slower (then again i dont think that would have fit the story properly)
The writing is excellent and the characters are well fleshed out. The story is interesting and has a fresh feel to the VRMMO genre. I especially love the world building and feel a lot of thought has gone into the theories behind it. Despite a somewhat slower paced plot than most wn it's still an exceptional piece and certainly something for those who enjoy proper novels as well as wn and ln. My only comment would be to perhaps increase humorous situations if possible. However that is my personal preference, as I know from personal experience not all writers are gifted in witticism.
I am very impressed with this story. The writing is excellent, the characters are well crafted, and the hints of greater plot are truly interesting. The author clearly has a passion for the world he's built, but the details never overwhelm the character development or action in each chapter. It's really a pretty awesome story so far. Give it a read!
A gamelit story where the main character has more than 1 friend? Where he actually spends time with them instead of just using them for group quests or someone to save in a PVP fight? I can't wait to see how the group dynamics change as the story continues. A solid 4.5 out of 5, mostly because the story is just getting started..
