Review Detail of Aodhan in eFate: An MMO Story

The writing is excellent and the characters are well fleshed out. The story is interesting and has a fresh feel to the VRMMO genre. I especially love the world building and feel a lot of thought has gone into the theories behind it. Despite a somewhat slower paced plot than most wn it's still an exceptional piece and certainly something for those who enjoy proper novels as well as wn and ln. My only comment would be to perhaps increase humorous situations if possible. However that is my personal preference, as I know from personal experience not all writers are gifted in witticism.