MN_1223
so far(Ch42) the novel is pretty good compared to many other novels. The mc's attitude(calm and not stupid/naive) and the world background are interesting. without saying to much spoilers. The mc needs to go through trials in a trial world. the trials are in tiers and the mc is one of the lucky ones to be the 1st tier. Hope the novel stays good as so far it looks like a newly formed gem that just needs time
The story is great the only problem i have with this story is the the slow update but that is not a major problem as long If it not montly that is all i had to say and now im saying this to get pass the word count so why are u still reading this by far this is way past the wordcount now so im just writing to this to make u read more okay now im done or not....... okay im really done now
These are things i liked and disliked in the story and I am in no way hating on the novel and author. • grammar has minimal error. • story build up was great. I was intrigued the most at the teleportation from earth to the trial zone per trial day. • having an AI or system is cliche but still tolerable. • huge turn off for me is chapter 31 onwards. it was okay to help your siblings and family but then they also could join in the trial 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄 Still worth reading though. Amazing job Author! can't wait for more.
I am utterly confused by all the good reviews, I will start with pros and then state my issues. Pros: Writing quality and the effort author put into his system. Cons: I read 29 chapters till now and there's not a single person except MC. I mean there is no conversation at all, it's just MC grinding. With no conversation, I can't give the character design more than two stars as they are literally no characters except MC. My second issue is with the system, as the chapters go on, there is more system than the story. There are some chapters where 80% is system panels and his skills but no story. Update stability is slow. World background is ok, I can't give it much as there's only MC till now. It was fun for first 10 to 15 chapters but got bland as the chapters went on. I hope the author corrects his issues. I am dropping it for now, I will get back to it and do another review if there's any improvement.
Only griefs I have with this novel are very small. Every once in a while there's a grammar mistake (most likely due to the author typing too quickly and not catching them when proofreading. They're forgivable and not like the ones you find in cultivation novel #497) Worth a read, not the deepest but it occasionally explores more complex topics.
i love it and have nothing really bad to say about the story. the writing quality is very good with no grammar errors the story development and the world background is well written. the only problem (because the story is so good) is the updating stability in other words i want more f*****g chapters [img=update]
I Enjoyed reading this novel very much. it especially got me in the first chapters. the more i read it, the more i love it. writing quality is top notch. author talent for making this unique and awesome novel is without a doubt the real deal. till now. there is nothing wrong and absolutely enjoyable to all people very recommended. keep the great work author!!