Review Detail of AutumnSolstice13 in Earth's Alpha Prime

Item: Earth's Alpha Prime
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

AutumnSolstice13Lv43yrAutumnSolstice13

These are things i liked and disliked in the story and I am in no way hating on the novel and author. • grammar has minimal error. • story build up was great. I was intrigued the most at the teleportation from earth to the trial zone per trial day. • having an AI or system is cliche but still tolerable. • huge turn off for me is chapter 31 onwards. it was okay to help your siblings and family but then they also could join in the trial 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄 Still worth reading though. Amazing job Author! can't wait for more.

Earth's Alpha Prime

MN_1223

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Br0ken_Blade9Lv2Br0ken_Blade9

please ask yourself this, if your siblings had terrible conditions, and suddenly you got a chance to save them, you most likely would, and his siblings could have joined the trial if it wasn't for the health problems, which is why the got added.

3yr

AutumnSolstice13Lv4AutumnSolstice13

Didn't i just say in my comment that it is ok to help your family. I just don't see the point where they are added to the trial. I said that was one of the things that I disliked. I never implied anything else.

Br0ken_Blade9:please ask yourself this, if your siblings had terrible conditions, and suddenly you got a chance to save them, you most likely would, and his siblings could have joined the trial if it wasn't for the health problems, which is why the got added.

3yr