Review Detail of RedGunner in Earth's Alpha Prime
Review detail
I am utterly confused by all the good reviews, I will start with pros and then state my issues. Pros: Writing quality and the effort author put into his system. Cons: I read 29 chapters till now and there's not a single person except MC. I mean there is no conversation at all, it's just MC grinding. With no conversation, I can't give the character design more than two stars as they are literally no characters except MC. My second issue is with the system, as the chapters go on, there is more system than the story. There are some chapters where 80% is system panels and his skills but no story. Update stability is slow. World background is ok, I can't give it much as there's only MC till now. It was fun for first 10 to 15 chapters but got bland as the chapters went on. I hope the author corrects his issues. I am dropping it for now, I will get back to it and do another review if there's any improvement.
Earth's Alpha Prime
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I did not trash it in any way, I just started the facts. I read 30 chapters and I think that's more than enough, I have read around 200+ books on this app and never found a book with no characters or no conversations after the first 30 chapters. I also said I will re-review it if it improves, for now, three stars are decent, if I trash it then I would have given it a one star. My whole review was genuine, the system is good but too much of system panels is sometimes off-putting. You know there are two or there chapters which have only the system panel with no story, so I believe my review has the facts to support.
IMightBeGod:I wouldn't trash a novel that's in its first 30 chapters, just because of a lack of character's, This is practically the exposition just keep that in mind.