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Great grammar and spelling so far (which compared to 99% of the novels on this godforsaken app is amazing) Huge potential for the plot so far and no real qualms with any of the character interactions so far Great at explaining the system and abilities What can I say? This novel is pretty awesome! βπΌ
Yeah great start and system choice as it will be fun to see where it goes also hope this doesn't end up like most dbz stories that never get done or fast enough releases harem is ok but maybe only up to 3 so as to not side track much of the story but still have him making many next gen sayians on earth
Writing Quality: The writing in this book is good, not too advanced. I would say, for those who use this school system, around eighth or ninth grade level. Itβs a little below where I read at, but I donβt mind. However it sometimes gets a little spotty, so 4 Stars. Writing Stability: Donβt even get me started... As of now, 7/1/20, the stability is worse than dogsh*t. Hopefully it gets fixed, as the author promised. 1 Star Story Development: The development of the story is pretty good. Nothing too much to complain about, the only thing I would complain about, though, is the fact itβs illogical to take in the two girls. 5 Stars World Background: As itβs based on one of my more favorite animeβs, I cant really fault the background much. Itβs just... altered? kind of. 5 Stars Overall, I would say this book is a solid four, four and a half depending on the reader.