Craze_Novel
The story is good but my only problem is the author not Uppercasing and not using commas like for example, he wrote manhattan new york instead of Manhattan, New York, and not putting commas in some sentences that needed it. That's the only problem I found, if the author fix this problems many people will read this ff.
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Not that bad, but certainly not that good either. The mc is a joke and a lazy way for the author to justify him doing what he does. He has rich and powerful adoptive grandparents so the mc can do anything, go anywhere and buy anything he want (his grandparents bought him an internet cafรฉ and a supermarket)....
1)ะะฐัะตััะฒะพ ะฟะธััะผะฐ - 5. 2)ะะฑะฝะพะฒะปะตะฝะธะต ััะฐะฑะธะปัะฝะพััะธ - 5. 3)ะ ะฐะทะฒะธัะธะต ััะถะตัะฐ - 3. 4)ะะธะทะฐะนะฝ ะฟะตััะพะฝะฐะถะฐ - 4 5)ัะพะฝ ะผะธัะฐ - 4. 6)ะะฑัะฐั ะพัะตะฝะบะฐ - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 4 5) background of the world - 4. 6) Overall rating - 4.