Review Detail of Keyos in Dimensional Chat Group: The Descendant of The Morningstar
Review detail
The story is good but my only problem is the author not Uppercasing and not using commas like for example, he wrote manhattan new york instead of Manhattan, New York, and not putting commas in some sentences that needed it. That's the only problem I found, if the author fix this problems many people will read this ff.
Dimensional Chat Group: The Descendant of The Morningstar
Craze_Novel
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Afonso_AaronLv5Afonso_Aaron
Craze_Novel:Well this is reasonable review so I will keep it and tried to fix it thanks for the review!image
Craze_NovelAuthorCraze_Novel
I am not sure i could only let the story flow but now ican said that Hermione going to be his wife or main wife
Afonso_Aaron:How big the hárèm going to be ?
Iron_Man_3000Lv14Iron_Man_3000
Funny thing is… is that you are one of the first authors I’ve seen that acknowledges a review as constructive criticism
Craze_Novel:Well this is reasonable review so I will keep it and tried to fix it thanks for the review!image
Iron_Man_3000Lv14Iron_Man_3000
Funny thing is… is that you are one of the first authors I’ve seen that acknowledges a review as constructive criticism
Craze_Novel:Well this is reasonable review so I will keep it and tried to fix it thanks for the review!image
Dao_Of_PatienceLv11Dao_Of_Patience
Craze_Novel:I am not sure i could only let the story flow but now ican said that Hermione going to be his wife or main wifeimage
