An interesting story well paced and following a unique plot. Despite the few errors here and there to do with aspects such as describing the place where the hand bends in chapter1, in reference to an elbow. It's a good story none the less.
This story needs to be read by more readers! I demand more features! Jokes aside, the story is captivating. I enjoyed it a lot. I can feel its potential and hope it will find success! Good luck[img=recommend]
A beautiful story about the girl whose life changes will make her look forward to the life's opportunity more than before. Nice work by the author. keep writing.