Reviews of Devil's Word magic in Fairy Tail
Devil's Word magic in Fairy Tail
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I really like this fanfic and would lite to see it till the end. I think that it has a lot of potential and would love to read other works of the author if he ever does. Good luck.
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Not gonna talk about settings much other than the fact that the author did FT a solid one. Mc's personality is given some promising development through the story so far. Rather than exploiting knowledge or fix-fic this story is more about the mc fighting against other original chars, which is refreshing... Man, I'm really bad at being a critic. Can't find a single thing to complain about.
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This story has one of the best potential I've seen but it was ruined by the stupidest MC ever!!! He can actually do anything he wants with mere words as long as he have enough ethernano and he uses it like a plebe. Problem #1 (Your parents are dead?): Say ressurect. If you don't have enough ethernano, use a lacrima dumbass. Problem #2 (You want to kill people?): Say Hakai and use that purple **** on them. You don't have enough ethernano? Refer to problem #1 asshat. Problem #3 (You don't have enough ethernano to strengthen your stupid self?): Say absorb or collect. Or better fucking yet say create perfect body, you know, the body that can easily absorb ethernano like the an op character he should have been. Problem #4 (Your stupid mc doesn't want to meet or does want to meet the other participants?): Say Globe to create one then say track to know if you're near one. Then Clairvoyance to see what he/she looks like. Problem #5 (You have a stupid mc and he knows he is stupid?) : Say Intelligence. Simple. His power has a lot of bad sides but if he prepared enough, he would have been a lot stronger. Like make a bracelet that gather's ethernano and blasts a bijuudama or he could make satellites to kill anyone he want to with hakai energy and he doesn't even have to absorb the ethernano himself.
...the god chose the stupidest MC ever. No one can defend this MC because he's ignorant and doesn't know better. Why would he be training his enemy?? Maybe because the author admitted he wants her on his team. So literally the MC tells everyone his only advantage in training magic for this harem member. Then by some crazy coincidence it turn out these 3yr olds are the other players who just happened to move into his village a day before hand. I can't continue reading this if this is what lays further in the chapters. Dumb MCs and poor excuses for his actions isn't going to make this fic any better.
go i like it his magic is all the magics combine together since it can be used that way anything he say can work that goes to the limit of not effecting others directly also as long as he can prove enough ethernano for the spell he can even do any spell he like even {Gate} Spell i can't help think about the one ainz used in overlord anime
I'm gonna not be too shameless and give myself a 4.8 review... yeah seems about right! Hello there! I'm the author of this here fanfic :) I'm not gonna say it's great or better than other fanfiction stories but give it a try! You might actually like it who knows lol. Also just to clarify it's highly probable that this WONT become a harem. So if you're into that sorry. :(
continue this i hope he at least take ultear and erza as lovers please they wouldn't meet too much erza will be the main one since she is with him in fairy tail and maybe they can form a team before the story start and in the story he can be with the team author do you believe that if i say that i am stopping myself for giving a list for the girls i'd want mc to go to but i won't be shy and say that it's lucy erza ultear mira lisanna brandish juvia virgo kagura and minerva without the make up and dimaria those are my favorit girls but i supress myself from listing them and got for my beloved ones that are erza abd ultear they both suffered from sad past and a lot of pain and even in the story they were still in pain and endure it as they put other before themselves like we see in erza always care for the members of fairy tail and ultear sacrifice even though it didn't get the way she want she was still happy saving some lives and mainly gray and if i want yo state another one it would be brandish i like her she too felt betrayed and live alone in pain and also was guided by the wrong person (zeref) so i though about it if i was a good author i'd write a fanfic that i would make mc take at least this three or if like the harem in the list above
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Honestly it's frustrating how arrogant the main character is despite facing many losses.. he doesn't even use his magic to its full potential and he calls himself strong.. despite being a good story, his arrogant personality, lack of basic knowledge ruins the story..I might also add he is dumb..but I'll still try to read this story maybe he'll change.. (Update at chap 21)
@rein you're writing about yourself aren't you đđđđđ Anyways. Guys do check this one out. The main character is an otaku just like a lot of us. Poor guy just wants to watch anime but gets stuck in the role of god. It's hilarious! The grammar is amazing, updates are steady and who doesn't love the world OF Fairy Tail??? GIVE THIS A READ!
