Review Detail of eccentricbeing in Devil's Word magic in Fairy Tail

His magic isn't omnipotent in its capabilities, not without a grimoire. Without one he can only do stuff that he has been doing and add some effects onto himself With actual grimoire spells he can even use a make shift jojo stand or nen abilities, even create an entire "thing" that would be a spoiler were I to say it here. Hakai falls in that category too. He needs to go round about ways to recreate some spells like naruto's rasenshuriken by using a few spells combined. The lacrima point is valid, but either way his magic can't affect other directly so, no. He can't ressurrect the dead. The whole making a tracker thing wouldn't work on that kind of scale either, he doesn't know who he's looking for after all. While looking for participants would be a tad too vague and search works on very specific things. He cannot do the ethernano absorption thing, the devil in black clover would have been infintely stronger if he could just absorb the surrounding mana, making himself infinitely stronger. It's why i never used absorbtion, and also his "Vessel" has a limit to how much it can take. My previous devil point is why i think he can't just say words and improve himself indefinitely... I actually did think of a satellite previously, and I might employ on later on in the story. The magic gathering bracelet is a good point though... I could probably have him use that now, sorry that I didn't think of it... Honestly, I'm trying to make the whole thing interesting and all but it's quite difficult to please everyone AND myself. If i started using specific things that i don't like and don't want to add the writing process would cease to be enjoyable for me... That would lead to me dropping the fic and I dont want to do that. I wanted to make the MC grow through a long period slowly but surely, in the process not everyone will enjoy it. But I do, and that's part of the reason I'm writing after all. The fault is mine entirely for using a magic type with near infinite possibilities. Definitely a valuable learning experience for me in writing. I do hope that you none the less enjoyed reading, thanks for leaving this review😊😁👍

Respect. I give out a lot of harsh comments and trashtalks but the other authors never really cared about the advice parts because of the negativity in my words but you took it like a champ. If you look into it more, I disliked the mc's choices but not specifically him nor you, the author. I said the mc was stupid but I never said it was realistic because I get how he's trying to cling onto happiness because the pain was too much for him to take. My take on it is more like goku is overpowered but stupid, midoriya has the makings of a great hero but lacks self-esteem, or ichigo is great but wins with plot armors. Did you get it? As for your novel the mc has op powers with a guild with the most potential but lacks intelligence in preparations. Just like how naruto prepares konoha's with technology when he became the hokage, Goku trains even though he is not aware of stronger foes before beerus, and how midoriya still keeps on researching even though he has plot armor power from all might. What I mean is the mc is stupid but his not as retarded as goku to actually believe that training is the only way to prepare right? I have some questions though. Why can't he just use his magic to accelerate his age to get the grimoire or use his magic to copy arc of embodiment to create a hyperbolic time chamber to age himself and train to have a better edge than the other participants since they don't have the same knowledge as him. The other participants are basically brutes or tacticians with limited knowledge of the multiverse based on the way 'god' said it. If that isn't possible then he can just use the eclipse gate since lucy's mom is still alive and will likely help him unless she wants a way to happen between the op participants. Time travel fixes every mistakes he did. He can even kill some his enemies while they are still young. The last things is if he can use gate, then why not make a gate inside his enemy and squish or rip off his/her heart from a distance? He can even stab the brain directly. The potential is limitless. He can even use it to leave his **** inside his opponents brain and call him "**** for brains".

Respect. I give out a lot of harsh comments and trashtalks but the other authors never really cared about the advice parts because of the negativity in my words but you took it like a champ. If you look into it more, I disliked the mc's choices but not specifically him nor you, the author. I said the mc was stupid but I never said it was realistic because I get how he's trying to cling onto happiness because the pain was too much for him to take. My take on it is more like goku is overpowered but stupid, midoriya has the makings of a great hero but lacks self-esteem, or ichigo is great but wins with plot armors. Did you get it? As for your novel the mc has op powers with a guild with the most potential but lacks intelligence in preparations. Just like how naruto prepares konoha's with technology when he became the hokage, Goku trains even though he is not aware of stronger foes before beerus, and how midoriya still keeps on researching even though he has plot armor power from all might. What I mean is the mc is stupid but his not as retarded as goku to actually believe that training is the only way to prepare right? I have some questions though. Why can't he just use his magic to accelerate his age to get the grimoire or use his magic to copy arc of embodiment to create a hyperbolic time chamber to age himself and train to have a better edge than the other participants since they don't have the same knowledge as him. The other participants are basically brutes or tacticians with limited knowledge of the multiverse based on the way 'god' said it. If that isn't possible then he can just use the eclipse gate since lucy's mom is still alive and will likely help him unless she wants a way to happen between the op participants. Time travel fixes every mistakes he did. He can even kill some his enemies while they are still young. The last things is if he can use gate, then why not make a gate inside his enemy and squish or rip off his/her heart from a distance? He can even stab the brain directly. The potential is limitless. He can even use it to leave his **** inside his opponents brain and call him "**** for brains".

Thanks for the reply, to answer some of those questions is hard but i'll try. I don't think aging himself to obtain a grimoire would even work as this isn't the same as Black clover, 'God' said he'd find it in his {Storage} spell when he turns fifteen. Basically on his fifteenth birthday, So even if he's 20 physically he still needs to wait on that 15th year to come by so that the Grimoire is placed in his Storage. On the Lucy's mom comment, the novel already passed that point and i'm pretty sure she's gone by now. The only thing he could have plausibly done to help was open the gate himself, but I doubted he'd have that capability at the time it happens... Hard to say really, but i went against it . Also, I think the Eclipse gate was imperfect or something? Zeref, Who created it (Or at least came up with it. I don't remember if someone else made it, but i know for a fact he created the idea and the blue prints to it.), didn't use it even though his goal was to go to the past. Perhaps the problem there was that you can't change the past itself via the eclipse gate? Like, Zeref goes back in time and Kills acnologia. Because that would be contradictory, as now he won't go to the past to kill acnologia, it never happened and it's back to square one. (Grandfather paradox, I believe it's called) That is how i See the Eclipse gate at least, as once it was destroyed and people couldn't come from the future Everything went back to it's own time, but... Somehow in that instance of the anime the effects remained even though they said they shouldn't... Considering that's the case maybe there's a difference, I dunno it's really weird that Zeref didn't use that if it would work so I'm assuming in the Actual Lore of fairy tail it wouldn't work and the case with Future Rogue was a bug in the system xD Perhaps, it was caused by Ultear's sacrifice distorting time and then simultaniously in a minute or two Natsu destroying the eclipse gate which sent Rogue back to his time and thus sent the dragons back to theirs. All the playing with time distorted the world and that's why it didn't bring everything back to how it was, at least not completely. It even caused The Eclipsed spirits so yeah. That's the only plausinble explanation as to why time didn't shift back to how it was that I can think off... So i'll go with that. A hyperbolic time chamber is actually doable with a Grimoire spell I guess, since he'd be creating a separate dimension that would house actual people. That's hard. I'll see if i do it... And finally the gate thing, like I said his magic can't affect people directly. Creating a spell inside another person doesn't sound very doable, not even in Black clover where they have a Mana Zone where anywhere they want they can cast a spell do they do so in another person's body. So even if it's not the Magic restrictions I think because the person's body had energies that conflict with the Mana/Ethernano or whatever you're using to create the gate, Those energies belonging to the person you're using the spell on, you woulnd't be able to create it like that. At least that's my take on it, I could be wrong of course but it's what i'm going to go with. I hope that all makes sense, i thought it over but we could always disagree on something, there's a thing called "Opinions" that we should both be well acquainted with after all. Thanks for reading my fic :P

Thanks for the clarifications and surprisingly it's logical. And I get how you didn't include the eclipse gate now since being a logical person you saw it as a plot hole of the series. I'll be reading your fic and take care.

You too, I hope you'll enjoy reading my future chapters :)

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